“People most respect the powerful not when they exercise their power, but when they
refrain from exercising it.”
Write an essay in which you develop and support a position on the statement above. In
writing your essay, you should consider both when the statement may be true and when it
may be false.
Power by definition is the ability to perform a task or getting things done, it is also a form of authority. Some would argue that exercising power would make people respect you and point to cases of Adolf Hitler during the Nazi’s war or the powerful HuXian of the Han empire however this people were not respected but feared, some would argue that refraining from exercising their power make people respect them and point to cases of Nelson Mandela in South Africa who used peace and his reforms were mostly on reconciliation instead of using his power to plot revenge against his former oppressors.
Those who argue that powerful people exercising their power could state the fact no German leader was as respected as Adolf Hitler who decided to bend the entire world to his knees by the use of his advanced machines and weapons, however was he really respected? Was the obedience of his subordinates a true form of respect or fear? Of course not, they had no choice, not following his order was tantamount to being killed and even though he was able to spread his name throughout the world as a powerful leader, he was not respected but seen as a tyrant who needed to be suppressed or stopped.
Now consider this; Nelson Mandela became the First African president of South Africa and had the power of the presidency to do whatever he liked and he was even voted because he suffered under the previous power and he was a perfect candidate to express the suffering and anger of the South African people, nevertheless he didn’t use that power to punish or plan attacks on his former oppressors but was more interested in reconciliatory approach, negotiating with this same people he could have sent back to their country to work with him and today South Africa is one of the most developed countries in Africa and this achievement was because he refrain from using the power to oppress like his predecessors and that act gained him worldwide respect that he was decorated with a Nobel laureate for peace showing that people most respect the powerful refraining from exercising those power to retaliate.
Like Nelson Mandela, the cold war between The United States of America and Russia in the 90s which if it had happened could have taken so many lives and rendered so many lands useless, these countries had the power to perform devastating effects to each other with their nuclear arsenal and a lot of nations were afraid believing if the war was going to happen would be the end of the continents and lots of talk were done to change the mind of both nations, Fortunately the war didn’t happen and today these nations are much more respected, they could have used their power and shown the world how powerful they were but they knew it would earn people’s respect.
In conclusion, it is clear that refraining from exercising your power earn most respect in fact I can say exercising power always would get to a point the oppressed would revolt because they have had enough and respect is best derived by refraining from exercising your power.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, in conclusion, in fact, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2528.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 532.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75187969925 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46787546159 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456766917293 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 792.0 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 23.0359550562 287% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 270.151346471 60.3974514979 447% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 316.0 118.986275619 266% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.5 23.4991977007 283% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.25 5.21951772744 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245736063779 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122399889814 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801881064235 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167104446199 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667667867738 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.2 14.1392134831 242% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.95 48.8420337079 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 12.1743820225 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.16 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 11.2143820225 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.