"A powerful business tycoon is in a better position to influence the destiny of a society or nation than any political leader of government official"
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above.
Whether a powerful business tycoon exerts more influence on the destiny of a society or nation than any political leader or government official is a complex issue. Nobody can deny that political leaders, accompanied by government officials and militants, have played a significant role in deciding the fate of a nation, especially during times of crisis. After carefully weighting the following facts, it becomes clear that a powerful business leader can indeed influence the destiny of a society or nation to a greater extent than any politician at least in our money-driven era.
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Sentence: Investments, employance and production are mostly controlled by business tycoons, while politician's actual role is more of a referee whose job is to keep a maintain a balance in the economic health and growth of a society, fighting corruption and extreme social exploitation by businessmen.
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