The author claims that by questioning the accepted truth and facts, we can learn more about the things happening in this world. I supported this fact as one can never understand everything in depth. No one answer every question. Questions can be posed constantly and we must seek answers for better understanding of the world. Also man is a social animal. He wants to learn more and more about the things happening around in the world. Thus to gain the knowledge, we must question authority.
What?Why? How? Words that are a necessity as they are the reason why we constantly seek answers , we are always vigilant and curious to learn more. Answer can be solved only when questions are posed . One cannot search for the enlightenment
without the aim for wisdom. If we wish to increase our understanding of the world functions, we need to continuously question the accepted norms that we are accustomed to.
For centuries people knew that when an object is thrown up in the air it is bound to fall back to the ground. Newton was the first ever to question the reason for this phenomenon which led to the discovery of the three laws of newton. The world was thought to be a flat surface until an expedition around it led to prove the fact that it was in fact a sphere. When people assumed that no object lighter than air could fly, it was Wright brothers who questioned how birds can fly , and this led to not only the invention of the airplane but also the field of aerodynamics.
Also, an atom was assumed to be the smallest unbreakable particle,until it was found that they contain even smaller particles called quarks .Light was assumed to travel in a straight line but a little observation led to the discovery that it can bend around small objects thus proving it is a particle and a wave! These discoveries could only be made because people wanted to know why the world works in a particular way.The greatest of discoveries made only by simple questions that were posed. Today researchers are trying to find answers to many questions yet unsolved.This must persist and people should always seek for answers.
As exemplified above, we realize that the only way to progress and understand things in every possible dimension we must seek for answers and raise more questions.This must be a never-ending infinite cycle as we can never get exhausted in learning and becoming more wise.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.202222222222 0.240241500013 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.195555555556 0.157235817809 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0688888888889 0.0880659088768 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0533333333333 0.0497285424764 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0511111111111 0.0444667217837 115% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106666666667 0.12292977631 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0488888888889 0.0406280797675 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6928772284 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0444444444444 0.030933414821 144% => OK
Particles: 0.00222222222222 0.0016655270985 133% => OK
Determiners: 0.108888888889 0.0997080785238 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0355555555556 0.0249443105267 143% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0288888888889 0.0148568991511 194% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2395.0 2732.02544248 88% => OK
No of words: 419.0 452.878318584 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71599045346 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.319809069212 0.366273622748 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214797136038 0.280924506359 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155131264916 0.200843997647 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109785202864 0.132149295362 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6928772284 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 219.290929204 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491646778043 0.48968727796 100% => OK
Word variations: 54.3097055613 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9523809524 23.380412469 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.9337389675 59.4972553346 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.047619048 141.124799967 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9523809524 23.380412469 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.674092028746 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.21349557522 249% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.4320945562 51.4728631049 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.19259259259 1.64882698954 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310028111505 0.391690518653 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0870716837814 0.123202303941 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0796253766108 0.077325440228 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.503600863045 0.547984918172 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.247500204795 0.149214159877 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111090610074 0.161403998019 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925023766675 0.0892212321368 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.331470032725 0.385218514788 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0964596445008 0.0692045440612 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19720468221 0.275328986314 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103339743884 0.0653680567796 158% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.