The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
Music has become an inevitable part of the human life today. Every person in this world is facing a tremendous pressure, from a student who is stressed with his grades to a service man who also is striving for better results every day. The world has turned into a rat race where everyone is hungry for success. But in the race, there are a lot of obstacles which humans have to overcome to lead a peaceful life. Every individual finds his way of comforting himself. Music is one such way.
With increase in the demand of music all over the world, musicians work really hard to deliver better and better quality of music every day. In a race to become the best musicians in the world, some become popular while the others are forgotten soon. But the question that arises here is, for what these musicians are popular. Is it their style, their charm that they get in the song, or is it actually music that people love of them? As long as these musicians live, it is very difficult to determine what part of them makes them lovable to people. Consider the example of the famous Indian singer Nusrat Fateh Ali Khan. Even after years of his death, he is still considered to be one of the best and his songs are loved by all till date.
During their career, musicians come up with a number of tracks, of which some are greatly accepted by the people. People actually connect to the music and go along with it. There are some people who find meanings to the song, while some just listen to it for the love of music. It is only when people actually connect to the songs produced by the musicians that the true value of the musician is understood. The musician gets fame, gets acknowledged by the people and is always loved by them. We see fans going crazy at their performances, dancing to their rhythm. But this doesn’t last for a long period of time.
Every artist has to go through the ups and downs of life. There is a time where the artist is at his lowest point, while there is also a point where he delivers great music and is at the peak of his career. When he goes down, there is someone else who is loved by the people and this process goes on and on. Hence, while looking at a lifetime of a musician’s career, the fame that he gets is limited and never long lasting. But we all have heard about the famous saying that "Form is temporary, but class is permanent".
Talking about class, out of the whole lot of musicians who have their ups and downs, there are some who are constantly growing. Yes they have form, but unlike the others, with class. They are loved for their entire lifetime. The world has seen some of the best musicians and always loved them even if they are not amongst us. The only thing that makes them different is their hard work and perseverance. To check what’s beneath the box, it is very important to take off the top of the box. It’s only then we realize whether the stuff in the box is actually good or no. In the same way, a musician might be covered by fame, but only when he is not present amongst us, but is still loved by the people, defines his true fame. He is always alive in the heart of his fans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, look, really, so, still, then, while, as to, talking about, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 40.0 19.5258426966 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2590.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 590.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38983050847 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92848004997 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2586270499 2.79657885939 81% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447457627119 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 824.4 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9453354625 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.1764705882 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14705882353 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 10.2758426966 234% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164586054285 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434233378378 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430222903925 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997365290462 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378446423288 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 14.1392134831 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 48.8420337079 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 12.1639044944 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.38706741573 81% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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