SCANDALS WHETHER IN POLITICS, ACADEMIA, OR OTHER AREAS CAN BE USEFUL. THEY FOCUS OUR ATTENTION ON PROBLEMS IN WAYS THAT NO SPEAKER OR REFORMERS EVER COULD
This topic raises controversial issue of weather the scandals in any field is useful or not, or whether they shift our attention to main problems or they misguides us. Indisputably, this scandals can also be trap for using this as a distraction and do the things which can be dangerous to us. Nevertheless, this scandals open our eyes for the people we believed in, sometimes they are the one which deceive us. Thus, I generally agree with the statement that scandals in any field are useful.
First of all, scandals whether they are in politics, in academic, in sports or in any other field they proved to be hazards not only to its field but its also proves dangerous to its country. I would like to say that this scandals are the examples that open our eyes about the field in which they happened. Sometimes we can not judge how abject it is, but every time it affect the country and people they are attached to that field. Let's look at the example of common wealth games'2012 that happened in India. The scandals proved to be of over 1 billion rupees. In this circumstance, obviously its eye opening incident but its also proved to be shameless act for whole country.
admittedly, this scandals can be proved even more dangerous than we could expect. Sometimes this scandals can be work as a decoy also, If we fell to this trap than sometimes it proved to be even more dangerous than we could imagine. Both common sense and personal experience have told us that sometimes we give more attention to the scandal other than required, and sometimes even more scandals are happened or sometime we forgot to praise the achievement of people that are trying to make world better. Hence we should focus our attention to all the things rather than giving over hyped story.
Furthermore, when we give scandal some focus than the story came to light may be wrong or having little than the truth, and we are using our every ammunition to criticize it. We should listen to every part of story and than give judgement about the people involved in that. Sometimes we forgot that this scandal can ruin any person's career; so we have to wait for the judgement and true story and than we should criticizes it.
In conclusion, I would like to point out that this scandals are useful and have opened our eyes; but we should also give attention to the story which we give little or no attention that can be also helpful to the country. As long as some measurements are performed to make sure that this scandals will never happened again, it will surely help us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...o its country. I would like to say that this scandals are the examples that open our...
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...ngerous than we could expect. Sometimes this scandals can be work as a decoy also, I...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'thus', 'in conclusion', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.168356997972 0.240241500013 70% => OK
Verbs: 0.178498985801 0.157235817809 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.052738336714 0.0880659088768 60% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0730223123732 0.0497285424764 147% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0973630831643 0.0444667217837 219% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0993914807302 0.12292977631 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0304259634888 0.0406280797675 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41909043876 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0466531440162 0.030933414821 151% => OK
Particles: 0.00405679513185 0.0016655270985 244% => OK
Determiners: 0.0953346855984 0.0997080785238 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0365111561866 0.0249443105267 146% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0223123732252 0.0148568991511 150% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2571.0 2732.02544248 94% => OK
No of words: 455.0 452.878318584 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65054945055 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.287912087912 0.366273622748 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.195604395604 0.280924506359 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153846153846 0.200843997647 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0945054945055 0.132149295362 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41909043876 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421978021978 0.48968727796 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.407313495 55.4138127331 84% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.9473684211 23.380412469 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8332976514 59.4972553346 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.315789474 141.124799967 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9473684211 23.380412469 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.684210526316 0.674092028746 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.21349557522 249% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.5078079815 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 0.854651162791 1.64882698954 52% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252154888564 0.391690518653 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.186732166083 0.123202303941 152% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.114639149875 0.077325440228 148% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.583912845354 0.547984918172 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134921670694 0.149214159877 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112857863149 0.161403998019 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740487435066 0.0892212321368 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.423507384582 0.385218514788 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0775144735476 0.0692045440612 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181313078905 0.275328986314 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726608142994 0.0653680567796 111% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.30420353982 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 11.0 3.66592920354 300% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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