Schools should do more to prepare students for the non- academic aspect of adulthood
Schools are the first institution that an individual is exposed to. And it is in these formative years of schooling that the character and attitude of an individual is shaped. It therefore becomes utmost important that the education that the schools provide must be holistic in nature balancing academics with non-academics.
Education provides basic understanding of the concepts, laws and theories. This helps in intellectual growth and reasoning ability of an individual. We see it in daily lives that place where the population lacks education there are problems of hygiene, violence and abuse. Schools therefore have to focus on primary task of educating the individual.
But, aren’t we are all familiar with the saying ‘all work and no play made jack a dull boy’. The saying draws correctly from the fact that if schools are turned exclusively into institutions imparting academic education and ignoring the non-academic part it may end up churning out lot of dissatisfied individuals. Academics is one part, a major part of the life would be living the life, carrying out basic chores, interacting with people, following laws and respecting other people’s beliefs. A society lacking this education may well be referred to as more educated but their narrow understanding of life and its functioning will be harmful for society. An example of this is seen recently when educated youth from certain section of society get radicalized take up anti-social activities. The reason is that they were not taught how to distinguish between right and wrong in early years and hence are vulnerable.
So, the best was a school can help an individual and society is to identify the talent, interest of an individual. Provide necessary support and mentoring along with basic education so that the individual can lead a more satisfied life in adulthood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ead a more satisfied life in adulthood.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23602484472 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.17701863354 0.157235817809 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105590062112 0.0880659088768 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0310559006211 0.0497285424764 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.027950310559 0.0444667217837 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127329192547 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0683229813665 0.0406280797675 168% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.94302763292 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0155279503106 0.030933414821 50% => OK
Particles: 0.0124223602484 0.0016655270985 746% => OK
Determiners: 0.105590062112 0.0997080785238 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0217391304348 0.0249443105267 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0124223602484 0.0148568991511 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1865.0 2732.02544248 68% => OK
No of words: 298.0 452.878318584 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.25838926174 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.372483221477 0.366273622748 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.328859060403 0.280924506359 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.244966442953 0.200843997647 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.177852348993 0.132149295362 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94302763292 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 219.290929204 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60067114094 0.48968727796 123% => OK
Word variations: 66.4852980649 55.4138127331 120% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8666666667 23.380412469 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1201456154 59.4972553346 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 141.124799967 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 23.380412469 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.533333333333 0.674092028746 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 52.7525727069 51.4728631049 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.82894736842 1.64882698954 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235750323726 0.391690518653 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0990958576216 0.123202303941 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0620424960552 0.077325440228 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.532495932807 0.547984918172 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.120516214329 0.149214159877 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986673397315 0.161403998019 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475766712064 0.0892212321368 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.348237810646 0.385218514788 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0432387910717 0.0692045440612 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164100779856 0.275328986314 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196752749866 0.0653680567796 30% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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