Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
The world has witnessed a huge stride in the advancement of science and technology in the past fifty years. From telephones to smart touch screen phones or from oversized slow computers to slim and fast ones, the field of technology has greatly benefited people along with improvement in overall lifestyle and solving society's problems. In future, if the pace of development in science continues at the same rate, one day if not all, most problems in a society will be solved.
The overall life expectancy of humans has impressively improved compared to the past century. People in current generation live for more longer time than before when there were little advancements in the medical field. With the help of science, now there are cures available for deadly diseases like cancer which in the past had no way to be cured. Although, cancer sometimes with the current complex medical procedures is not completely curable, it can be treated partially to prolong the life of a person unlike the past where there was no technique whatsoever. In the future, complete cures are possible if research in the field continues at good pace.
Supercomputers that are being perfected have a bright future to solve complex numerical problems in a very little time. For a scientist, things like cancer treatment procedures, spacecraft engines, etc can be modelled as a combination of complicated trigonometric, differential, non linear involved equations. These equations take months, if not weeks when solved using traditional computers, however supercomputers can solve them within hours. Thus with the help of such computers any problem in a society could be modelled as a differential equation and solved. Admittedly, the modelling of the problems cannot be done by computers, it involves mainly the human brain.
Arguably, sound judgement can not be done by science as it requires great wisdom of a person. This wisdom is achieved from great knowledge and previous experiences in the life of certain person. Even if these are programmed in robots to make judgements for crimes, there will always be unsuspected scenarios or loopholes that may be encountered while issuing sentences/taking decisions regarding a thief's crime.
From above, it is clear that science and technology will be able to solve almost all of the problems in a society. Few problems will require the intervention of human as with the current ideas and growth, science is impossible to grow into certain fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 338, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...ifestyle and solving societys problems. In future, if the pace of development in science ...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'longer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: longer
.... People in current generation live for more longer time than before when there were little...
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Line 9, column 446, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...rcomputers can solve them within hours. Thus with the help of such computers any pro...
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Line 17, column 82, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...technology will be able to solve almost all of the problems in a society. Few problems wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22443890274 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92087557207 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561097256858 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3551227269 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.388888889 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2777777778 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209217946459 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663022462223 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596707159688 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122656633362 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484074254735 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.