Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
there is no doubt that improvement in science and technology has helped improve the human society as a whole. technology has improved every individual day to day life and have made it easier to perform most of the tasks an individual perform during a day. However, with advantages come some disadvantages as well which cannot be overlooked. To say that science and technology will solve all of society's problems is a far strectched statement and I do not agree with the claim that all problems will be solved for the following reasons.
Firstly, the creator of the science and technology are humans as the science and technology evolve, the human race evolves. With every passing day the technology is improving and so is human's intelligence. As we have built the technology we know the loopholes of it as well. so, when the technology loophole is exploited the problem occurs. To illustrate, in today's age the reach of internet in increasing rapidly but along with it is increasing the issues such as online thefts and hacking. we have real world examples where bank networks are hacked and money from the banks have been stolen online. individual accounts get hacked and highly sensitive personal data gets stolen. Eventhough all safety measures and anti hack technology is applied and used still the hackers find their way through the network and are able to execute such thefts.
Secondly, the biggest issue that we as a society are facing is that technology is forming our perception, one which is one sided. what we like is what we're shown on the internet which results in forming a bubble. there have been instances where our decisions are driven or shaped by technology powerhouses without even us recognizing it. one such example is the last us Presidential elections where it was found that the web data was used by Cambridge Analytica to influence the election results. there are other instances such as Indian elections where the social media was used to spread false news and rumours. Both the ruling party and opposition exploited the use of social media and the internet to gain favor.
one may argue that science and technology is alleviating the day to day problems and making it easier to execute routine job and slowly for surely working towards solving problems but we should be mindful of the fact that not all problems are getting solved.
In conclusion, not all problems can be solved by science and technology. As with time and different technology we adopt to, our problem as a society also changes and new problem occurs. so, to say that science and technology will solve all problems of human society is not correct. This is an iterative process in which there will be problems which will be solved by evolution of science and technology and then new set of problems will occur which will result in new technology being indentified and used and then again a new set of problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.5258426966 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2432.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 497.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89336016097 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60981074902 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468812877264 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 768.6 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8481435435 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.739130435 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6086956522 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.39130434783 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419118092793 0.243740707755 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113807051747 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112809965532 0.0758088955206 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239047820486 0.150359130593 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112628112463 0.0667264976115 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.