Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.

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Average: 5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 30, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
Science and technology plays a important role in our daily life. It co...
^
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'contributes'?
Suggestion: contributes
... a important role in our daily life. It contribute in all different aspect of life. Howeve...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 254, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
..., people who has unstable emotion, They dont feel save or they hate their life, will...
^^^^
Line 4, column 449, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...otional reaction from different people. they are more about logical matter. It is...
^^^^
Line 6, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...mmunication between people in distance. but, it also weakens the quality of these c...
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Line 6, column 158, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this communication' or 'these communications'?
Suggestion: this communication; these communications
...ce. but, it also weakens the quality of these communication. People which they communicate directly...
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Line 6, column 387, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'uses'?
Suggestion: uses
...an scenes to deliver an information. It use not only voice, but touch and other fac...
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Line 6, column 582, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun problems is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...the society will be improved leading to less problems. to sum up, communication i...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...e improved leading to less problems. to sum up, communication is a great tool t...
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Line 8, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ion is a great tool to improve society. however, alone cannot solve all the society pro...
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Line 8, column 121, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
...ot solve all the society problems since these problem related more to human feeling and emoti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 258.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27131782946 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65149143437 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527131782946 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7481000362 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.0 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1764705882 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28404439051 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102105262548 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132332512323 0.0758088955206 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184364565727 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105601463026 0.0667264976115 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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