Education plays vital role in every society. Countries with good educated people can be developed faster. The argument claims whether formal education is still effective for creativity. Even though formal education could create barriers in our minds, it is an important start point for different major in education. In my opinion, I disagree with this statement for three main reasons: formal education is a time effective, generalized and focus and a standardized system of education.
First, formal education is designed by expert with specific goals. It helps and guides students to gain the basic skills to discover their interests and focus in them. Not to mention generalize learners in other non-interested major. Additionally, formal education is a time effective system which seeks to make all learners with the same age at same level of education. For instant, first grade student in Saudi Arabia in formal education study basic communication skills, Arabic letters and simple math. After successfully passed he or she will recognize all Arabic alphabet and know basic algebra in short time which lead them to explore their interest. In the other hand, informal education might not achieve this level of education in the same short time.
secondly, formal education has a standardized accurate evaluation system which help to equip each skill in the right place. In Saudi Arabia, Secondary school graduate students have an accurate report for their strength and weakness in different subject. They also go through a standardized accurate skill measuring test called Qiyas which help universities or corporate to understand more the capabilities of each individual. This is an effective method to guide the student toward the right place whether work or continue education that suit their skills.
Despise these advantages of the formal learning, it has disadvantages as well. It is not suitable for genius personal who tend to be creative. Smart folks which are usually faster in learning than average people find this type of education is boring. These people tend to leave School because they find it wasting time. Great inventor like Albert Einstein left the school. Informal education more suitable for them to fulfill their needs. They can explore science at the rate of the brane work.
To sum up, it is statistically a fact that a formal education is routine and systematic type of learning. However, it the most effective way, in my opinion, to make the brain more focus and gain information in time effective manner. Also, it helps to discover skills and equip them in the right place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, in short, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2195.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 420.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22619047619 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69716719622 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528571428571 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0098539573 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4230769231 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65384615385 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189804322003 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566217306563 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383375889475 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10937416198 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396192778645 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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