Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
Science is developing faster than any other time in the history. Though it will solve most of the problems, but there will be more new problems which science cannot solve. It may solve the problems we are facing now, but it will never be able to make this world problem free.
Science and technology have developed in a dramatic way in last few decades. Now we can look deep down to our body, which is the most complex thing in our earth which matters. The problems, mostly are related to our well being. Means the well being of human and sometimes other animals. But we are more concern about us. Which leads to the incredible improvement of science and technology. As problem comes, we try to solve it using science. We develop technology using the knowledge of science. It is a never ending process. If we think about the challenges of this time, the climate crisis, energy issues, better medicines, better surgical methods and safe foods etc. are the most important issues. We are sloving it day by day. We are developing ways to make sea water drinkable, transplanting heart and so on. But this is not all. Science is everywhere, but with limitations.
We are somewhere bound to the nature. There are things in the nature which we can understand, but do almost nothing. A single cell does thousands of reactions inside it in a very balanced way. It is hard to believe, these pattern could be exactly figured and controlled by technology. It willl always leave us with an imbalance if we try to interfere with cells with a great measure. So this will leave us some medical issues.
Human loves themselves but does not always care about fellow humans. Even good people only see their own side of the story. That leaves us with a challange to balance in the environment and soiety. Suppose what is good for America may not be good for ethiopia and vice versa. So solving a problem sometimes lead others to another problem. War in Afghanistan helps to reduce radicalism from the society but leaves civil Afghan people to a miserable life. So, what we think is problem solving, may be a problem inducing situtation too.
Sometimes human's carelessness causes to more problem. Or we cannot see the future of it. Most of the products and services technology gave us in the last few decades has several side effects which leads us to greater problems. Ready to eat food are tasty and time saving, but has great health risk. Computer is great help, but causes health problems and addiction sometime.
So, thechnology, which brings comfort to the life usually brings another problem with it. So, this never ending science and technology is a trap. Science is finding solves for daily problems, these solves bringing new problems and we are creating new problems. So science and technology will never come to an end by solving all the problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a dramatic way" with adverb for "dramatic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... Science and technology have developed in a dramatic way in last few decades. Now we can look de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2358.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 495.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76363636364 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49244629671 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49696969697 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 735.3 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 40.0 20.2370786517 198% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0162777592 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.95 118.986275619 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.375 23.4991977007 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.7 5.21951772744 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.13820224719 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215865875857 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525347209521 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049528079572 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126007487868 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664428366346 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 14.1392134831 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.44 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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