Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
Science and technology have seen exponential growth in the past few centuries. From as simple as a bulb to a space shuttle that orbits the earth has been a testimony for science, technology and the development of humanity's civilization. With the development of human civilization comes physical, mental, social and economic problems, this problem can be combated by contemporary and innovative solutions with the help of rising science and technology. To further communicate this, I strongly believe that science and technology will definitely solve all of societal problems.
To illustrate the aforementioned point let’s take example of the disease that we were able to cure using science and technology, to put it in perspective about two centuries ago millions of people died due to simple common cold. This was then change by the development of antibiotics and vaccines. Another example could be locomotion, places that would take days or even years to visit are been visited in matter of hours. This innovation brings forward new era of work and development.
Still, many would argue that a perfect society can’t be accomplished, which though is a valid argument can be a double edge sword as no thing or creature can achieve perfection and thus we can only aim for close to perfection which science and technology will easily provide with.
ergo, we can conclude that though a perfect utopian society is hard to achieve, with science the probability is never zero.
- Technology while apparently aimed to simplify our lives only makes our lives more complicated Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In develo 50
- Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society s problems Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your pos 33
- Technology while apparently aimed to simplify our lives only makes our lives more complicated Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In develo 50
- Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society s problems Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your pos 33
- Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society s problems Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your pos 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nothing'?
Suggestion: nothing
... argument can be a double edge sword as no thing or creature can achieve perfection and ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ergo
...technology will easily provide with. ergo, we can conclude that though a perfect ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 240.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19166666667 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91814248377 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.4932671777 128% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3104544147 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.6 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179109194562 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613918827751 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411659694328 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096748419536 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446579602324 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.