Should there be an unified national curriculum throughout the country for schools? What do you think? state your claim and support with suitable examples. Well I'll have to agree with the author's idea of unifying national curriculum throughout the country. This helps in judging students on the same scale of knowledge. Having different curriculum for different state is like judging a book by its cover. Each curriculum would have it own syllabus and methodology. Although different part of the country has its own individuality and history due to globalisation and easy of travelling and fierce competition. It is necessary to have single curriculum for the entire nation.
Currently every state has different syllabus for its students. This makes it complicated for colleges and institutes to select students from different part of the country as they have studied from varied syllabus. For example if one state has set its education standard low it would be easy for the students residing in that state to score in exam. While a neighbouring state which has a higher standard for education will have a tough examination. so, the students of that state will score less compared the former state. When the students marks are valued later for higher studies it is evident that the university or college is going to prefer the student who has scored more neglecting the fact that the student has little knowledge of the subject because the low standard of education. The problem doesn't end there when the student from the former enters the latter state university he'll shave a tough time because he was not taught to that scale of difficulty. So, unifying a proper curriculum saves these minor trouble which is huge difficulty as a matter of fact.
Having a single curriculum throughout the nation can also save the nation a lot of money. When each state has its own board to set and regulate syllabus it is bound to consume more money for maintaining an educational board in each state. Rather then that when there is a single curriculum there will be one board which directs the educational system. This saves a lot of money the nation.
So although it would be difficult to prepare a single curriculum for the nation it is better to have it as it benefits on the long run. Initially it maybe difficult to accept but it will prosper in the later years.
- TOEFL TPO 18 - Integrated Writing Task 86
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, while, for example, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89775561097 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6403054493 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461346633416 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.5596609427 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3913043478 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4347826087 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26086956522 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3730132005 0.243740707755 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124457237468 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137669258792 0.0758088955206 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222527100227 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166838025167 0.0667264976115 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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