Building up healthy minded generation is the hot-button issue of the moment. Hence, such topics raises the controversial issue whether societies ought to support special talents and provide training in an early stages to develop their talents. Indisputably, that children these days have to adopt and shape their future. Thus, I generally agree that societies have to bolster their roles to develop the talents.
To begin with, the first and the foremost point coming to the mind is the multifarious benefit beyond supporting talented children. In other words I would like to point out that firstly, supporting them will lead to sharpen their abilities and skills and keep them informed by every things new. For example, taking center of excellence for innovative projects as a vivid example in Jordan, this center care for all talented children and provide them different work shops such as robotic programs, artificial intelligence and training programs. In order to flourish their abilities. Thus, it is pretty obvious that from the first point the importance of supporting the talented children.
Moreover, the second vital point that could be taken into consideration is by supporting and training the children will enable them to get expose for valuable information and they will be able to communicate effectively with each others. In other words, they will widen their horizon with well rounded information and outstanding performance.
Last but not least, one crucial point is by supporting them we prepare new scholars and staunch leaders for the future to have great impact by developing, producing, inventing or making they life safer. For instance, our ancestors past life, was full of complexity for example if they want to make a phone call they have to go to the call center in order to phone someone, in contrast nowadays they life is easier you can call anyone and any time from your cell phone. In other words, that we have to invest on people as much as we can to advance the world further more.
In conclusion, due to aforementioned reasons and examples, I totally agree that we have to create suitable supporting environment for the new generations consequently that will have a positive impact on the youngsters itself and the world in general.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in general, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13440860215 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71952681676 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559139784946 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1332101046 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 5.21951772744 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235229760158 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796322464478 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580406703558 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125221317495 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671715888153 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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