This topic raises the controversial issue whether people have to identify their goals and this will reflect and measure their success. Indisputably, that successful people apply their goals precisely but this does not indicate a significant success or they did not face and obstacles in their plan. From my point of view, I generally disagree that the true success can be measured from achieving the goals we set to ourselves. However, to substantiate my case this essay will elaborate my reasons and examples clearly.
To begin with, it is irrefutable that to be a successful person is not an easy task and you have to plan a meticulous one to assure the acme of success. One one hand, and to elaborate my point take a look at this quot " Failure is the key of success" , The first reason why I disagree that the best way to assure the success is to learn from your and the others mistakes because there is actual experience simulate the real situation, is not just a written goal on your notebook.
Furthermore, the second vital point that should be taken into account is that you cannot control the external variables that have a direct impacts on the people success. Further illustration require take a look at this example, Thomas Addison faced a lot of struggles that precluded his progress at the beginning. Such as, scarcity of resources or the people culture. Thus, we cannot say this person is not successful. In deed, he tried to use the obstacles to burgeon his self because " from struggle comes strength even pain can be a wonderful teacher". Consequently, it is pretty obvious there is not specific measure for the optimal success.
Last but not least, contrary point of view claims that the real success is by obtaining the goals, this is true in different aspects such as sets a clear plan very important to know if you are in the right track or not, then it is crucial to save time and effort, but we cannot guarantee the full success by following all the goals.
All in all, due to aforementioned reasons and examples, there is no specific tool to measure the level of success it is completely a subjective process and they have to be aware that there are a lot of struggles will face anyone wants to exit from their comfort zone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, so, then, thus, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 398.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73115577889 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66177684985 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520100502513 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.7308034703 60.3974514979 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.21951772744 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209494447625 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725207451065 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585099682294 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114091382069 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427849086451 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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