tpo32
The reading and the lecture both discuss noisy sound under water in the North Alantic and Arctic Ocean. On the one hand, the reading clearly state that there are many theories about the source of the unusual sounds. On the other hand the lecture argues these theories.
First of all, the article claims that the strange voice comes from male whales to attract the female whales. However, the lecture refutes that the whales live in the surface of the water and the sound come from the deep water it is not likely to be the source of the voice.
In addition, the reading makes argument is that the sound comes from marine invertebrates it called Giant squids and this animals very smart and can emit the sound. The lecture argues this point by stating that the first sound was in 1960s and disappeared after the 1980s, and there is not reason to stop hearing the sound for one decade and return hearing it after 20 years.
Lastly, the reading passages argues that there is military technology and it is the cause of the sound.The lecture counter this claims by pointing out that it is hard to build engine very fast and without sound , or to build silent engine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e water and the sound come from the deep water it is not likely to be the source ...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nvertebrates it called Giant squids and this animals very smart and can emit the sou...
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Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1960s'.
Suggestion: in the 1960s
...int by stating that the first sound was in 1960s and disappeared after the 1980s, and th...
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Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...nology and it is the cause of the sound.The lecture counter this claims by pointing...
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Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...build engine very fast and without sound , or to build silent engine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, lastly, so, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 1373.03311258 70% => OK
No of words: 208.0 270.72406181 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.625 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01408697044 2.5805825403 78% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 145.348785872 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528846153846 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 419.366225166 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8273291792 49.2860985944 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 110.228320801 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 21.698381199 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198343105631 0.272083759551 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889882948636 0.0996497079465 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448453959199 0.0662205650399 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120118470632 0.162205337803 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371676637739 0.0443174109184 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 63.6247240618 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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