For any society, it is always a matter of pride if it's citizens with their amazing talent bring it glory. I, therefor am in complete accordance with the given issue stance.If a society or any nation hopes to enlighten it's name, then definitely it should offer adequate support to children who exhibit extraordinary skills.
While any given individual possesses a creative talent,it can be subject to astray if the society is likely to condone it. Leonell Messi, the well-known football player, despite of being a brilliant player, suffered from a condition termed growth hormone deficiency.In those circumstances, it was Barcelona football club who came forward to lend a helping hand to his family.After apt treatment only, he started his career towards the path of being a professional player.
Additionally,such situations can be noticed in various societies wherein an organization or a government body has provided the correct platform for the individual's progress.The famous Indian Mathematician Ramanuj was encouraged by his lodgers to gain expertise and further knowledge in the field. Now owing to his contribution to the concept of number properties, the scope in the field of mathematics has significantly widened. Also, the famous singer Mozart had a thorough backing of the royal court to perform various melodies.Today, his name in his field can be anything but forgotten.
However, it can not be argued upon that only those children who possess extra-ordinary talent should receive credulity from the government.The society should equally support every child for his/her progress and development.Nonetheless, if a sports player or an artist needs either a financial or moral backing, then the societal organizations should provide help in whichever way possible.
In a nutshell, any society should consider the marvelous skills, be it in - arts, science or commerce and provide support, as this might in future help in bolstering the global place of that particular society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nonetheless, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 310.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43548387097 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27501392903 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.4932671777 131% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.2888025988 60.3974514979 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 187.222222222 118.986275619 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4444444444 23.4991977007 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144684813891 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610654532078 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467963961149 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815560892097 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433118527604 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 14.1392134831 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 48.8420337079 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.38706741573 125% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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