Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Undeniable, it is the key role and responsibility of the society to identify talents, weakness of the children and provides training in order to make them talents from the early ages. Children are the future of the society as well as country. If the children get opportunity to show their hidden talent, these talents also bring name and fame of the society as well. I mostly agree with the above statement of identifying the talents of the children and provide training for them in order to make their talent flourish in a sharp inclination.
Firstly, children are the futuristic of the societies. What types of societies are we assuming totally dependence on children hands? These children should not be deprived of basic elements like food, health, education and shelter. So, it is the responsibility of the society to make arrangement of basic elements of children’s life such that these children may not spend ample amount of time fostering these basic elements. Such children can utilize their time recognizing their talents and one day, they can represent their society increasing its name and fame. For example: Societies are full of different and diverse children. Each child has its own talents and interest. Some are interest in music; some are involved in science related projects and some are interest in dancing. Thus, it is the role of society to create platforms according to the needs of children like music schools for music lovers, dancing school for dance lovers and creating lab for science lover’s student who can utilize their time practicing their experiment in science lab.
Secondly, with the increase in ages, some children show affiliation towards athletics and sports like football, cricket, gymnast and volleyball. They grow up imagining to be the best player of his decades. Each year they increase their interest in their favorite games and isolate from other children from their group. For example: Sachin Ramesh Tendulkar, god of cricket has its affinity towards cricket from his childhood days. His parents recognized his talent and admission him in the cricket academy in order to make him practice cricket. Although, he is not fine in academic careers, he is extra ordinary in playing favorable shots through midwickets. His success not only bring change in his cricket career but also bring name and fame of his country by recognizing worldwide as land of little master blaster. Thus, if his society was unable to recognize his talent and forced him to choose the career paths as other children then we were not able to see Sachin favorable innings in cricket.
Thirdly, by promoting the special talent of children also compel other children to think better career path by motivating or encouraging them to recognize their talent and practice them and become success. There are some erudite scholars who are not inherently talent by birth but achieve success through arduous and hard determinant. For example; Albert Einstein used to be a dumb student in his early classes of his career and used to confuse in recognizing mathematical numbers. Through the assistance of his uncle who also was a math teacher helped him to recognize his talents in mathematics and scientific experiments and one day he was recognized as a great physicist of all time.
However, some argue regarding the role of society in identifying the talent of children isolates them from normal children. These talented children may show dominancy upon other children and treat normal children as useless and inferior in front of them This may bring conflicts in society and may arise segregation in society which may bring disruption and dissonance of the society.
In conclusion, the society shows a path of development by identifying the talents of children and these talents may be upgraded with the help of training in order to bring prosperity in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'imagining being'.
Suggestion: imagining being
...t, gymnast and volleyball. They grow up imagining to be the best player of his decades. Each ye...
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Line 5, column 1000, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ee Sachin favorable innings in cricket. Thirdly, by promoting the special talent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 97.0 58.6224719101 165% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3258.0 2235.4752809 146% => OK
No of words: 637.0 442.535393258 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11459968603 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.02382911018 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65874842119 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 215.323595506 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445839874411 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1014.3 704.065955056 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0810905037 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.357142857 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278574661753 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087800402107 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742681785732 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181135000863 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803435025849 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 100.480337079 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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