Comprehensive knowledge made based on the statement that the society is an active co-inherent to a child's life and upbringing is not just mere saying, but it is a true formulation that leaves an imprint in a child's metamorphic journey.
A society is composed of the environ, the people leaving in it and their cultural behavior practiced. Assumptions have been made based on an idea that children learn faster when they are younger than in their older age. Thus, teaching a child his or her mother-tongue is an important factor that aids and improve their communication skills.
Clearly, most children have this inbuilt natural ability to do things without being taught. This however is strayed down to be a special instinct embedded in them which many refer to as "Special Talents". I remember being taught in school about the medieval art practiced in Nigeria with an exemplary man known for his talents in converting earthed clays into beautiful artefacts like clay pots, calabash, etc. During that time, Pa Aina known for his talent was also regarded as the father of Igbo-Ukwu art collaborating with another traditional artist to increase the rate of cultural diversity around Nigeria.
However, this speculation shows that there is need for the society to identify children with these special talents by providing a way at an early stage to express these talents in diverse areas and fields involved. I remember a little child living in my environ with so much anticipation and dreams to construct an airplane, I remember asking her what her ambition is in future and her response was " To become an aeronautical engineer. I was super proud, and I motivated her to pursuing these dreams. I am confident to say that her creative talent has established her career wise.
Evidently, reading the book of Ben-Carson "The gifted hands" simply showcased his talent as a young black-African who had passion for the concern of human health and life processes. I always envision little children with various talents in creative art, designing, singing, dancing etc put through a stage of vigorous training and to what extent they recreate this added values in their different fields.
The society as a small unit can impact positively in the trainings given to these children as they grow up representing their society actively in areas that help grow intellectually. For instance, government sponsorship in children with talent helps individuals to better advance academically in their route to success.
Several occasions, many tend to dissociate the success of trainings given to talented children, thus this can escalate competition amongst them and a drift in colloboration.
In conclusion, i withold this approach that the idea of training impacted on talented children brings a clear innovative retreat to diversify and become better in whatever they do. I can confidently say education is a building block to achieving a successful career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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...motivated her to pursuing these dreams. I am confident to say that her creative t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2517.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 479.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25469728601 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93628690063 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580375782881 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 769.5 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7711936743 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.473684211 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2105263158 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21052631579 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28671887223 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806936076854 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557611874569 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116321276416 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398572604243 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 100.480337079 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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