train passengers in Sydney
train as a means of transportation is the easiest and fastest way the people of sydney have been taking in the early century. The government made this possible to improve as and promote a result allowing lot of passengers to constantly enjoy the magnitude of a good transport system built during their tenure .
I remember being a child and having phobia travelling a far distance in a route that leads to this small city, but the best part of this journey was all about the food served on the train. Hardly do i remember the authenticity of how riverdale looks similar to sydney, however to crown it all up , there is this sensation that lingers through my spines giving me that urge to fantacize the journey all over again. Thus so far, the nauseating tingle in my throat oozes as a result of the older men smoking down the hall-way of the business class section of the train.
I got mum scared and agitated when i gave her this shock from behind the back seat trying to play games with her, immediately she hit me with a long umbrella and screamed my name " Natalia the adventurous impertuous little girl, its past your bed time, hurry or else mama won't administer your sweet berries" . Ohhh yummy sweeys like that makes me behave properly and feel chilled like a dog wating for its treat from his owner.
However, walking out of the train and inhaling the beautiful air and glamoring on the beautiful sites of the water spring running passing the inlets of the hills and valleys, all i wonder is the beautiful creatures designed by God. I kept on humming silently this tune of " all things bright and beautiful, all creatures great and minute, all things wild and expedient, the lord made them all.
Evidently, i am self assured that with my full chest inflicting a humor of pride in me that i envision coming to sydney and bringing along my hubby and children to experience this nature of artefacts created in the image and likeness of our creator who was, is and yet to come.
Syndey a town i can sing my lovely lullaby harmonizing the tune of Eldeweise. What a great city that illuminates the aura of longevity. I want to smile always like the perfume of laughter filled in my lungs pushing harder to escape like a bird let out its cage to sing melodiously in its era of harmony. I believe and i am certified i want more of this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, then, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 6.8 294% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 53.0 5.60731707317 945% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 33.7804878049 189% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 965.302439024 201% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 425.0 196.424390244 216% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56235294118 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 3.73543355544 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4990117271 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 106.607317073 243% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609411764706 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 283.868780488 213% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.6064685285 43.030603864 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.5 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3571428571 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139475938133 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421407586486 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550707161644 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694356280499 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747234801136 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 40.7170731707 238% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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