Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
In the life of a student choosing a field of study is the cardinal part. choosing a field based on the availability of jobs may look attractive because of the stability it provides but lacking the required enthusiasm may harm you mentally in the long run .If you choose your field based on your talent and interests it may help you get a job from the limited availability and you can also create job opportunities for others in your field of study.
Let's look at an instance where choosing a field of study based on your interests and talent not only helps you but also others in the same field. If we look at Bill Gates or Steve Jobs who selected there field of study based on their interest when the jobs are limited at the time, because of their interest they have created a revolutionary product which has created a big industry and huge amount of jobs for others to pursue their studies in the field
However, choosing a field of study based on interests may fire back because every time you can't create a jobs in that field by creating a new products or research . It might be possible you have huge amount of capital needed to do research or develop new technology in a field .For example marine biologists where number of available jobs is limited because of many reasons and also you need to be on the top of your field to land a job. In such cases choosing a job based on the availability of jobs is the best thing .
In conclusion choosing a field considering your talents and interests may open a lot of opportunities not only for you but also others .Now a days there are very fields where job opportunities are limited and most of the students are looking for a field with more availability of jobs than trusting their own talent
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 320.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.471875 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51437171495 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44375 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 23.0359550562 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.81627987 60.3974514979 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 204.428571429 118.986275619 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.7142857143 23.4991977007 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 5.21951772744 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398833781294 0.243740707755 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.238750753483 0.0831039109588 287% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832326286691 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297668009892 0.150359130593 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574999266923 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 14.1392134831 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 100.480337079 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 11.2143820225 178% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.