Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.Writ
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...easily and quicly find a job and create a insightful career after grasuation. The...
^
Line 1, column 318, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...tful career after grasuation. There are have no bias based on those two ceratia; how...
^^^^
Line 1, column 436, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...eld based on our interests and talents, those can bring us endless energy and courage to ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t of all, It is easy to finsh a task in a area that we have talents. All of us ha...
^
Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...s and talk with them with my own ideas. Thus I chose a major related to history, and...
^^^^
Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'turns'?
Suggestion: turns
...hose a major related to history, and it turn out to be suitable for me. If I just in...
^^^^
Line 3, column 876, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...ss. It could not give me energy to keep on going in those fileds. However, other peo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the interests') or simply say ''Most interests''.
Suggestion: Most of the interests; Most interests
...k it easy to find job after graduation. Most of interests and talents have littele career furture...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...fair. Most of companlies could not hire a employee without other kills. On the ot...
^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'i think', 'such as', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208163265306 0.240241500013 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.163265306122 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0591836734694 0.0880659088768 67% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0530612244898 0.0497285424764 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0938775510204 0.0444667217837 211% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.124489795918 0.12292977631 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0326530612245 0.0406280797675 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.39221594327 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0285714285714 0.030933414821 92% => OK
Particles: 0.00204081632653 0.0016655270985 123% => OK
Determiners: 0.0734693877551 0.0997080785238 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.034693877551 0.0249443105267 139% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0183673469388 0.0148568991511 124% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2372.0 2732.02544248 87% => OK
No of words: 442.0 452.878318584 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3665158371 6.0361032391 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.266968325792 0.366273622748 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.16742081448 0.280924506359 60% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.119909502262 0.200843997647 60% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.052036199095 0.132149295362 39% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.39221594327 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450226244344 0.48968727796 92% => OK
Word variations: 49.4791959218 55.4138127331 89% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0476190476 23.380412469 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8357018559 59.4972553346 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.952380952 141.124799967 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0476190476 23.380412469 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.674092028746 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 37.7897004956 51.4728631049 73% => OK
Elegance: 1.17763157895 1.64882698954 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283480010631 0.391690518653 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133507662047 0.123202303941 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.115737603614 0.077325440228 150% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.467185703937 0.547984918172 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149212310482 0.149214159877 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992916794461 0.161403998019 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606119569139 0.0892212321368 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.326199298221 0.385218514788 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0976396392989 0.0692045440612 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196442279456 0.275328986314 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768570434327 0.0653680567796 118% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100 Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
--------------------- Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations to cover all aspects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...easily and quicly find a job and create a insightful career after grasuation. The...
^
Line 1, column 318, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...tful career after grasuation. There are have no bias based on those two ceratia; how...
^^^^
Line 1, column 436, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...eld based on our interests and talents, those can bring us endless energy and courage to ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t of all, It is easy to finsh a task in a area that we have talents. All of us ha...
^
Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...s and talk with them with my own ideas. Thus I chose a major related to history, and...
^^^^
Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'turns'?
Suggestion: turns
...hose a major related to history, and it turn out to be suitable for me. If I just in...
^^^^
Line 3, column 876, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...ss. It could not give me energy to keep on going in those fileds. However, other peo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the interests') or simply say ''Most interests''.
Suggestion: Most of the interests; Most interests
...k it easy to find job after graduation. Most of interests and talents have littele career furture...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...fair. Most of companlies could not hire a employee without other kills. On the ot...
^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'i think', 'such as', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208163265306 0.240241500013 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.163265306122 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0591836734694 0.0880659088768 67% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0530612244898 0.0497285424764 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0938775510204 0.0444667217837 211% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.124489795918 0.12292977631 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0326530612245 0.0406280797675 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.39221594327 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0285714285714 0.030933414821 92% => OK
Particles: 0.00204081632653 0.0016655270985 123% => OK
Determiners: 0.0734693877551 0.0997080785238 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.034693877551 0.0249443105267 139% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0183673469388 0.0148568991511 124% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2372.0 2732.02544248 87% => OK
No of words: 442.0 452.878318584 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3665158371 6.0361032391 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.266968325792 0.366273622748 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.16742081448 0.280924506359 60% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.119909502262 0.200843997647 60% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.052036199095 0.132149295362 39% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.39221594327 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450226244344 0.48968727796 92% => OK
Word variations: 49.4791959218 55.4138127331 89% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0476190476 23.380412469 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8357018559 59.4972553346 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.952380952 141.124799967 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0476190476 23.380412469 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.674092028746 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 37.7897004956 51.4728631049 73% => OK
Elegance: 1.17763157895 1.64882698954 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283480010631 0.391690518653 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133507662047 0.123202303941 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.115737603614 0.077325440228 150% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.467185703937 0.547984918172 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149212310482 0.149214159877 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992916794461 0.161403998019 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606119569139 0.0892212321368 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.326199298221 0.385218514788 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0976396392989 0.0692045440612 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196442279456 0.275328986314 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768570434327 0.0653680567796 118% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations to cover all aspects.