Some people believe that competition drives young athletes to perform at their best, while others believe that competition discourages those who are not athletically talented from participating in organised sports.
The statement presents two conflicting ideas about the young athletes. Some people believe that that the competition drives young athletes to perform at their best, while others believe that the competition discourages them. I personally believe that one can only give his best if there is competition, although competition sometimes puts mental pressure on athletes and unnerve them.
The competition provides a cause to perform best in any field. If there had not been any competition among people then there would not have been a feeling which would have drove them to do best. Imagine a sport, where, there is only few athlete and the one is the strongest of all then the athlete who is the best will have no fear to lose. He will always win and become overconfident. To be successful in sports an athlete needs to work hard always. He need to be fit physically and mentally. If everyone is equally talented in a sport then the competition to win that sport will drive athlete to perform best.
I had always been fond of basketball since my childhood. Earlier in the school time I was not taking this game seriously because I had to perform in inter-school competition and I our school had the strongest team of basketball players. At that time I never had any pressure that I will not win the game. But, when i came to college, we had to play with the one of the best teams in that state. During that time we used to practice a lot, exercise and make strategies. This things we did because we had to win that competition. So, it is very important to have competition which gives feelings to do something and to achieve that is not easily possible.
I would not say completely that a competition does not discourage athletes, but it depends on the athlete in what way they are taking that competition. In a game, everyone knows that one has to win and other has tools. What is more important that we learn from every game and improve ourselves so that we can do better in our next game. If we get discouraged and do nothing to win the game then who will be the loser? Obviously, the answer is clear, the one who sits afraid of the completion will be the loser. In red to win, the athletes have to overcome this sort of problems.
In summary, I certainly believe that the competition drives young athletes to perform at their best, but it also discourages them cannot be neglected. The only thing that one need to keep in mind that discouragement is nothing but a mental pressure to win a match, which should be overcome to actually win or give competition to the opposite team.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: that
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...s a cause to perform best in any field. If there had not been any competition amon...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'driven'.
Suggestion: driven
...ot have been a feeling which would have drove them to do best. Imagine a sport, where...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun athlete seems to be countable; consider using: 'few athletes'.
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...in sports an athlete needs to work hard always. He need to be fit physically and menta...
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...need to be fit physically and mentally. If everyone is equally talented in a sport...
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...that I will not win the game. But, when i came to college, we had to play with th...
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...ce a lot, exercise and make strategies. This things we did because we had to win tha...
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Suggestion: overcome
...ressure to win a match, which should be overcome to actually win or give competition to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, then, while, as to, in summary, sort of, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.3162921348 230% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 33.0505617978 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2130.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 464.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59051724138 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65654003627 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439655172414 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.9 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4579081829 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.56 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357977110206 0.243740707755 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105861596853 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158800002298 0.0758088955206 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23981890646 0.150359130593 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158348810533 0.0667264976115 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.38706741573 79% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.