Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Corporations today hold may be the most portion of resources after governments. In futuristic literature there is even a prediction, that those companies will hold a position in society higher than the latter. Therefore there is discussion today on what people should expect from such businesses and at which extent those entities should be responsible for the environment they operate in.
I personally believe that company should be aware anyway of the surrounding environment to be successful. Today big conglomerates already starting to be aware of that, for example, in clothing industry, such big players as H&M or Uniqlo trying to impress people with their conscious approach. This broughts huge of benefits to the image of the company, public and even internal.
Additionally, improper operation can lead to exhaustion of resources, regardless whether in society or nature, while supporting a mindful approach, the company may be able to create a thriving environment not only for itself, but for generations to come.
And as practice shows, corporations have an increased lifespan compared to humans, therefore, keeping a right agenda will affect a very long period of time.
On the other hand, money in capitalism is just a quantitative instrument of showing support and agreement. So in general you can ignore morality judgement and just use money and income to measure whether a company does good for the society or environment. However, I think that this can be a good position only if the government has a strong hold over the law, because otherwise corporations, especially those with a highly developed law departments, can find workarounds and holes in current legal state, what can lead to unthinkable and shocking consequences.
All in all, I strongly believe that corporations should go with a conscious approach.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...tion in society higher than the latter. Therefore there is discussion today on what peopl...
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Line 11, column 142, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... a right agenda will affect a very long period of time. On the other hand, money in capit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35616438356 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05693418217 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606164383562 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6306862469 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.21951772744 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219302985687 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682027236041 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549296730651 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948764081212 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405518967438 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.