Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Corporations affect the societies and environment where they operate in one way or the other. Where some people believe it is their responsibility to promote the wellbeing of the societies and environment where they operate, others believe that they should only make money provided they operate within the law. I strongly believe that corporations should work towards ameliorating society since they play a huge part in it. There are two reasons for the same.
Firstly, there has been numerous studies that show people who are happy at their work do a better job at it. For instance, Microsoft is a company that goes by the mission 'To Empower every person and every organization on the planet to achieve more' . Employees are attracted not only by the work they do but also by the support and promise of taking care of the wellbeing of their employees. If it had only worked towards making money and nothing else, it would not have been in the position it is today.
Another example we can take from this company or any major company nowadays is that they believe in giving back to society. Employees can donate their time or money towards a social cause and the company will match its donations. It enables society to grow. This in turns gains the company the respect they need in the corporate world.
Others might say that monetary benefit is the only thing company should be focussing on but they fail to realize that most majority of common people run by emotions. The respect, the corporation has more is the monetary benefit in the long run. People would deviate away from the products or services of a corporation that does not promote the wellbeing of the societies and environment. Only the giving back attitude would ameliorate the environment.
In conclusion, each and every one of us has a responsibility to promote the wellbeing of the societies and the environments around us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ganization on the planet to achieve more . Employees are attracted not only by the...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: EACH_AND_EVERY[1]
Message: Consider using 'each one'.
Suggestion: each one
...rate the environment. In conclusion, each and every one of us has a responsibility to promote t...
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Line 9, column 108, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding environments'?
Suggestion: the surrounding environments
...mote the wellbeing of the societies and the environments around us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 324.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87654320988 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62460997384 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496913580247 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3690747225 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9411764706 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417226047815 0.243740707755 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117547053396 0.0831039109588 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13639078575 0.0758088955206 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209230291006 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176402777859 0.0667264976115 264% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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