Working on particular work with a systematic approach will always result in better outcome. In same way, maintaining health should always be consider as priority of oneself. If we stay fit and fine it will eventually result in fresh day, thinking clearly, working enthusiastically, and staying happy. But if don't care for health then it will result in contraction with harmful disease's. The same thing is applied for environment too, keeping environment healthy will eventually give back us cool nature with more benefits. While in the case of law one should strictly follow the nation's law and work accordingly else might get convicted for transgression.
Every citizens bear the responsibility of keeping environment healthy and corporations should also take care of the same. If government allows a corporation to extract or mine precious metals or minerals from earth not just to make profits but for the making use of certain naturals resources at less expense. For example, 3M used PFAS chemicals in their solution to stop fires on large scale. But in early 2000's it was not known that the chemical was harmful but after examination of water source in nearby found out harmful and not suitable for drinking. This problem aroused due to 3m's negligence towards aspect of environment and public health. After, going through trail in US it faced fine of 10+ billion dollars. It not even lead to loss of wealth but also of environment health too.
Another example is El Nino or Fire in Amazon forest it is not only duty of government to stop it but also of corporations to make sure we live in health and good milieu. It is duty of corporations to solve the problem of El Nino by being smartest on earth which will eventually help in getting earth cooler and making safe environment for upcoming generations. Saving our upcoming generations life is the important aspect too by saving environment in which we live.
Same things as followed in case of Insider Trading if government finds evidence against higher authorities of corporation will eventually lead to closure of corporation or fine like 3M or even defame worldwide. For example, Harshad Mehta was doing insider trading to earn more from stocks by manipulating. He earned a lot but when authorities caught the culprit of market crash lead to fall of whole empire. Some times need to not only follow laws but do respect the environment too.
Responsibility of corporations is not just up to taking care of environment, health of employees or surrounding or following laws but it even more than these aspects. Corporations should understand their responsibility in every factor and help in development of country but also of country along with citizens and employees. It totally more than stated in topic I eventually disagree with both the points.
- Some people believe that universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student s field of study Others believe that universities should not force to take any courses other than those that will help prepare them for job 50
- Claim Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today Reason We are not able to make connections between current events and past events until we have some distance from both 50
- Some people argue that successful leaders in government industry or other fields must be highly competitive Others people claim that in order to be successful a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others 83
- Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness area in their natural state 50
- Some people believe that corporations have responsibility to promote the well being of the societies and environment in which they operate Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations provided they operate within law is to make as much as p 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'be' and 'consider'.
Suggestion: be always consider
... In same way, maintaining health should always be consider as priority of oneself. If we stay fit ...
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Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...usiastically, and staying happy. But if dont care for health then it will result in ...
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Line 1, column 580, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...e of law one should strictly follow the nations law and work accordingly else might get...
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Line 1, column 657, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
... might get convicted for transgression. Every citizens bear the responsibility of kee...
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Line 2, column 649, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...spect of environment and public health. After, going through trail in US it faced fin...
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Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'being the smartest'.
Suggestion: being the smartest
...ions to solve the problem of El Nino by being smartest on earth which will eventually help in ...
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Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...y along with citizens and employees. It totally more than stated in topic I eventually disag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, then, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2343.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 468.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00641025641 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87672155116 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525641025641 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3456833669 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.869565217 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.347826087 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69565217391 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153615777322 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439444560612 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453542509112 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914991588194 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315168881931 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.