Corporations are important parts of a country economy. They can make money and help a country develop. Some people think that making money is the only aim of corporations; others disagree. In my view, making money is one of the corporations' aims but it is not the only goal for three important reasons.
First of all, we should consider that the corporations are parts of the society so if they want to gain beneficial effectively, they must have a great relationship with their society. For instance, consider a corporation that provide cleaning house services. If the business managers just want to save money, they may prepare outdated equipment for their workers and workers can not clean the houses well, consequently, the customers will not be satisfied with the service. This may reduce the corporation's profit because customers will not trust this company any longer.
Second, another point that is mentioned in the issue is that the corporation can operate within the law and make as much as money as possible while it is not true in all countries. For example, in my country, there are strict laws regarding environment. If they pollute environment, they are forced to pay fine. This law led to all corporations consider environment in their plans as an important factor.
In addition, the point that a society can help a corporation make progress should not be ignored. The Pars company, for instance, this company has been instituted in Iran more than fifty years ago. When this company has started to produce its productions, it tried to respect people's rights. For example, the company provide a long term guarantee for its products. As a result, this company got bigger and bigger and now its products will be exported to more than sixty countries. Therefore, if the corporations accept respecting to the society as a responsibility, they can benefit from the society directly.
In sum, some people may believe that the corporations just should make as much money as possible but I disagree. Not only the corporations and society can help each other when they have a close and sufficient relationship but also the corporations might be forced to consider environment to avoid the government’s punishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'corporations'' or 'corporation's'?
Suggestion: corporations'; corporation's
...d with the service. This may reduce the corporations profit because customers will not trust...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 368.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08423913043 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93338206316 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48097826087 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3208627256 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.55 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.21951772744 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312027335552 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951726142494 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645976930019 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186169898046 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635707928972 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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