The aforementioned stance is indeed a question of dilemma- just like a double-sided coin. However, i am in complete accordance with the given stance. Along with the fundamental aim of self-progress i do believe that a corporation also has a moral obligation of societal well-being. The reason for supporting the given stance will be mentioned in the following passages.
To begin with, the sole purpose for the establishment of any corporation is to be a financial success. Nevertheless, now-a-days, business industries have understood the mutual gains obtained through supporting the causes of societal development and environmental protection. Thus, the concept of corporate social responsibility has come into existence. By caring about the societal needs a corporation is benefited simultaneously. A myriad of illustrations concerning this concept can be provided. The renowned shoe-making company BATA hired various regional people from the lower classes for the purpose of supervising and sales. Consequentially, both the parties were profited - on one hand, the shoe industry had to appoint employees at a relatively cheaper prices, while, on the other hand, the rate of employment of the region improved dramatically.
Likewise, one of the top 10 industries in the world, Reliance conducts various social activities in rural as well as urban areas to support the underdeveloped regions. Some of the activities are- providing food and adequate clothing, donations to orphanages. Such activities help in the upliftment of such regions and simultaneously bring more fame to the company's name.
Another trite example which can be put forth is of the tea making company. When the jute industry was on the verge of getting closed due to excessive reduction in the cloth's purchases, it was Darjeeling tea (industry) which came to it's rescue. Along with it's paper packaging, the company also started tea packing in jute.
Moreover, it cannot be totally possible for any industry to focus more on social and environmental responsibilities while neglecting it's financial responsibilities. However, these two motives can definitely go hand in hand. Thus, any industry which is financially secure can aptly bolster it's society by carrying environment friendly activities.
To sum up, along with the basic purpose of making money, any corporation, if financially sound should be responsible for the promotion of societal and environmental well being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, as to, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 375.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8 5.05705443957 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32300712579 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7095235615 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.571428571 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158561585309 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422690676297 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386275646379 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772302234579 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346332044598 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.06 12.1639044944 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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