Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the wellbeing
of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that
the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to
make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your
own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing
and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
There is no doubt that corporations should be responsible to advance society's well-being when companies have stable profits. The first priority of corporations are make profits to their stakeholders and employees in laws.
making profits for stakeholders is top priority resposibility of coporations because people are willing to invest the company because they want believe companies can make money for them. The managers should focus on how to make their companies with competition against other competitors. For example, managers should invest their money on research to create innovative products into the market to expand their product of market share. moreover, investiment of the equiment for the comanies will advance work efficicence. thus, managers runs the company in law to make raise company profits is the first priority.
moreover, companies have responsibility to make their employees with admirable enviroments for their jobs becuase employees are company's asset. provide better environments for employees will help company hire better employees to become more competitive. that is to say, even if employees was hired by company to help company make money, they should also get protection by the company. company should provide enough well-being for employees, they will willing to be hired by companies, and willing make their task efficiently. thus, if company has enough profits, the company not only need to follow the laws to provide the basic job enviroments, but also provide additional incentives to hire top employees.
while company only needs follow the laws to run its business, make well-being for the society and enviroment will be benefital for the copmany in the long term because of establishment of positive reputation. if they have stable profits for the company, they should pay a part of attention to establish their reputation by some activities. For example, company can invest more money on environment issue such as use friendly environmental material to replace harmful plastic material on their products. Comsumers would be lovely to buy their product, and then it would be benefit the compnay's reputation.
while company could make additional activities for the society when they have stable profits, the first priority of the company is responsible for their stakeholders and employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, no doubt, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51388888889 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88466437913 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469444444444 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2011871567 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.764705882 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168721731908 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067895236473 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465359442475 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120686735397 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300379192595 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.