Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Probably, from the very beginning of human society, the development of arts are vital elements in our lives. Presumably, financial support like funding may be one of important factors driving people to create art works. Some people may argue that it is essential to make art flourish and be accessible to all people through support of government funding. On the other hand, others may contend that completeness of the arts would be threatened by the funding. On balance, government funding is ultimately beneficial to the boom of the arts.
Government funding has a positive influence in investing the arts. First of all,governments has a responsibility in developing national arts well and also has the advantage in financial support over other independent institutions.Besides,from the overall and long term perspective to treat the arts, governments can invest money in different arts,which really makes more sense. Moreover,some art facilities like museums would be accessible to the public.For example,Chinese government has made decision to open all the national museums for free,which in fact promotes the popularization among masses greatly.
Admittedly, some negative side of national funding cannot be avoided,to some extent,as a result of which integrity of the arts would be destroyed.Because of the limitation of financial resources,government has to invest some of them selectively while others have to be overlooked. In addition,as we all know,the arts are the reflection of human’s ideology.If the art work is misunderstood by some opinions or view of policymakers, this kinds of arts will be marginalized with intention,whereas the situation happens in other arts on the contrary,they will be highlight and even be attempted to draw people’s attention.Last but not least,the action by government is likely to cause that independent institutions and individuals are unable to participate efficiently in the management and promotion of art.In other words,the power of society can not be put into full use tothe development of artistic creation.
Nevertheless,I am still inclined to agree with the former view.It is evident to witness that government’s abundant investment in arts is universal all over the world and it has generated beneficial effect. Government in some European countries attach importance to the popularization and development of arts,so artists are encouraged to show their works in gallery,museum or other public occasions and so many tourists are willing to admire their works while taking photos. Even though the destruction on the integrity of art possibly is a existing fact, more evidences are needed to support the opinion.
To summarize,I agree with the view that government funding is a huge benefit for the long term development of art. As long as the appropriate ways are adapted, the investment from nation would result in a good return in the art prospers and the interest of people.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2495.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48351648352 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47693696945 2.79657885939 124% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 786.6 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.496048881 60.3974514979 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.333333333 118.986275619 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0666666667 5.21951772744 289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.479364231054 0.243740707755 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174100719675 0.0831039109588 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802228154944 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279456399183 0.150359130593 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100722166743 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 14.1392134831 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 48.8420337079 67% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , governments
...ence in investing the arts. First of all,governments has a responsibility in developing nati...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...ort over other independent institutions.Besides,from the overall and long term perspect...
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Suggestion: , from
...r other independent institutions.Besides,from the overall and long term perspective t...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , which
...ments can invest money in different arts,which really makes more sense. Moreover,some ...
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...,which really makes more sense. Moreover,some art facilities like museums would be ac...
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Suggestion: For
...seums would be accessible to the public.For example,Chinese government has made dec...
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... be accessible to the public.For example,Chinese government has made decision to open al...
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...o open all the national museums for free,which in fact promotes the popularization amo...
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...de of national funding cannot be avoided,to some extent,as a result of which integr...
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Suggestion: , as
...funding cannot be avoided,to some extent,as a result of which integrity of the arts...
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Suggestion: Because
...ntegrity of the arts would be destroyed.Because of the limitation of financial resource...
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...thers have to be overlooked. In addition,as we all know,the arts are the reflection...
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...e overlooked. In addition,as we all know,the arts are the reflection of human’s ide...
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... inclined to agree with the former view.It is evident to witness that government’s...
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...e popularization and development of arts,so artists are encouraged to show their wo...
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...ncouraged to show their works in gallery,museum or other public occasions and so many t...
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...ion on the integrity of art possibly is a existing fact, more evidences are neede...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, still, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, in addition, in fact, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2495.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48351648352 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47693696945 2.79657885939 124% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 786.6 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.496048881 60.3974514979 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.333333333 118.986275619 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0666666667 5.21951772744 289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.479364231054 0.243740707755 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174100719675 0.0831039109588 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802228154944 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279456399183 0.150359130593 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100722166743 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 14.1392134831 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 48.8420337079 67% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.