Some people believe that increasing violence in the media is the cause of increasing violence in our society, especially among children. Others believe that children's peer groups and parental role models are a much more powerful influence on children's behavior.
“The children of a nation are its future”. Some people believe that increasing violence in the media is the cause of increasing violence in our society which is infact true as many young children watch televisions and use social media sites they being accustomed to everything that is happening around the world. And, children learn faster about these things in their young age.
Since, their are various shows and channels which telecast violent things which have effects on the children and so there thinking also changes. But I believe that the children's peer groups and parental role models also have a powerful influence on the life of children and also his behavior. Since most of the time of the young child is spent with his acquaintances and his friend's group in school or colleges, they are the one's who have an impact on child behavior. Since, it is said that the people or group with whom you live you learn from them and always select proper friends who enhance your life with amazing things not deterioate it.
So, as a parent it should be their duty to look after their child and see with which group of friends he spends most time with. Since, parents have a lot of influence on the children life they should also lookforward to educate his or her child in good reputated school as the number of students coming in that school would be of good families and in this way the child would also be able to have a high standard of thinking and ideas. Parent's should restrict children from watching any channels or telecast that would have bad impact on him and infact teach their children's to watch channels such as National Geography, Planet TV, and telecast such as Satyamev Jayate which would influence their lives and make them work the society. As Albert Einstein quoted "Only the life lived in service to others is worth living". By this their would be proper guidance and thinking in their ideas and services to people. Since,media is also important to have a influence on children's behavior so there should be many channels which provide knowledge and enhances their ideas. Moreover people think that increasing violence such as rape, scams, scandals have lead to devastation of the life of children. So, it should be looked into by news provider that they provide good information and have a positive influence on children and their surroundings.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270089285714 0.240241500013 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.151785714286 0.157235817809 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0669642857143 0.0880659088768 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0357142857143 0.0497285424764 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0736607142857 0.0444667217837 166% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.131696428571 0.12292977631 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0290178571429 0.0406280797675 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.45546648273 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0200892857143 0.030933414821 65% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0691964285714 0.0997080785238 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0223214285714 0.0249443105267 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0245535714286 0.0148568991511 165% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2390.0 2732.02544248 87% => OK
No of words: 408.0 452.878318584 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85784313725 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338235294118 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227941176471 0.280924506359 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183823529412 0.200843997647 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0833333333333 0.132149295362 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45546648273 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 219.290929204 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463235294118 0.48968727796 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.9035731672 55.4138127331 90% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 27.2 23.380412469 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.5455418201 59.4972553346 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.333333333 141.124799967 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 23.380412469 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.466666666667 0.674092028746 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.94800884956 61% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 49.9941176471 51.4728631049 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.64957264957 1.64882698954 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42984892572 0.391690518653 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.139470572488 0.123202303941 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0715496055194 0.077325440228 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.517200981976 0.547984918172 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139879138361 0.149214159877 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182165733719 0.161403998019 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118854257186 0.0892212321368 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.401983017289 0.385218514788 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0789663771441 0.0692045440612 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.37027214554 0.275328986314 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129758593599 0.0653680567796 199% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.