Political leaders have a responsibility to the population which entrusts them to make the right decision.The leaders of a country are required to make effective decisions in various compromising and pressure situations that affects everyone in the least harmful way possible. Now, some would argue that politicians who abandon their principles for a compromise are effective, as they generally heed to the public opinion. While others may argue that the political leaders of the former type are generally weak and the ones who remain firm on their principles and don’t eschew from their duties are the ones who make better decisions. I agree with the stance that leaders who don’t abscond from their morality and principles are the ones to be revered but on the other hand I can’t fully shy away from the fact that sometimes politicians need to compromise their principles to arrive on a solution. An effective leader is one that is a blend of both. The henceforth mentioned points and examples will shed more light on the claim.
Firstly, the claim that to arrive on a solution, a compromise is necessary is true in some regard. Heeding to the public’s opinion is what needs to be done when the situations are so dire that the country would land in a deleterious situation if a compromise not made. For example, the ugly spat between the Colombian government and the drug kingpin Pablo Escobar. The notorious drug lord was ill-famous for his mass murders from children to president of the country, and bombings across the whole country.He resisted arrest and would further harm the country and it’s population. Eventually the government succumbed to the demands of the public and he was left alone. Such examples show how an effective leader works when it comes to making decisions that are necessary to ensure peace and harmony throughout the country. He/She needs to compromise their principles in such situations.
Now, talking about the ones who don’t compromise on principles even in the toughest of situations.Such politicians are generally considered strong minded and the nation can depend on them to make the right choice in case of any adversity. For example, fight against terrorism.A politician who accedes to the demands of terrorists is generally considered weak.Public knows that there is no reform possible for terrorists and the leader who concedes to the demands of terrorists places the whole nation in danger. However, the leader, maintaining his integrity by following principles should not be oblivious to the effects of his practice of ardent following of rules and regulations.An effective leader is one who while maintaining his principles, tries to maintain law and order throughout the nation and ensure that there are no ill effects resulting from his decisions. Such leaders evaluate public opinion as well before making decisions .
In conclusion, the traits of an effective leader constitute both the facts mentioned by the claim. However, close scrutiny of the surrounding situations and hidden views by a leader is necessary for effective ruling and leadership.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'talking about', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256074766355 0.238963963785 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.155140186916 0.154291517835 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0897196261682 0.0886310499679 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0429906542056 0.0506014161523 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0336448598131 0.0449626384858 75% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119626168224 0.123526278965 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0336448598131 0.0379742944744 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85425821642 2.82910677849 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0373831775701 0.0316879551592 118% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0014075125626 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.119626168224 0.0950106342287 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0130841121495 0.0245489744465 53% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0299065420561 0.0157978311181 189% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3115.0 2899.98275862 107% => OK
No of words: 504.0 478.390804598 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.18055555556 6.0591788892 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.65681771538 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.392857142857 0.369966551584 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.301587301587 0.285172536893 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.228174603175 0.207245337619 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.176587301587 0.136322040163 130% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85425821642 2.82910677849 101% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 234.298850575 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474206349206 0.492565540709 96% => OK
Word variations: 54.9488332077 56.8184620615 97% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 21.1264367816 90% => OK
Sentence length: 26.5263157895 23.7468607788 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.0023402111 62.0618507366 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.947368421 143.81877709 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5263157895 23.7468607788 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.736842105263 0.728815259664 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.87931034483 82% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.71264367816 104% => OK
Readability: 56.6850459482 52.2641144681 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.76612903226 1.64547068916 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.548971511621 0.39480681544 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.14398388999 0.11556216369 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0989584264159 0.0736162880345 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.560656362029 0.531340600358 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188557263208 0.15197228837 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.246299094117 0.158818324754 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749749367173 0.0851127212816 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.525805069147 0.388921930462 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0790471091778 0.0677916285025 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.418561850889 0.28015025965 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590083223338 0.0610219844235 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.8591954023 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30459770115 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.96264367816 40% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.10632183908 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.93390804598 178% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.04597701149 33% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 17.0 15.0862068966 113% => OK
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Rates: 66 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 4.0 Out of 6