Essay topics:
Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: History
...s or abandon them as per public opinion.History gives us many examples of political lea...
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Suggestion: ,
... become effective either for good or bad , because of their consistent commitment ...
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Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...Abraham Lincholn was against slavery. He faced so much issues due to it but even...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...choln was against slavery. He faced so much issues due to it but even after all of...
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Line 1, column 371, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...very. He faced so much issues due to it but even after all of that, he remained ...
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Suggestion:
...that, he remained true to his principles and removed slavery from America. Had he...
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Suggestion: ,
...m America. Had he compromised his ideals , he would not have gone down in history ...
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Suggestion:
... principles. People identify him for his ideals. If they do not stay true to them...
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Suggestion:
...eople, it will create chaos and will not lead to any fruitful results. Political...
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...f the Nation’. People all over the world consider him as their idol and try to in...
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Suggestion:
...ples match the public needs. They should listen to everyone, analyse the pros and...
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...yone, analyse the pros and cons and then make amendments in their objectives for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, well, after all, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91317365269 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58881187509 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511976047904 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.7249692692 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5625 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26646938183 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900417441856 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690865709309 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146725616483 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525214265665 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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