Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The writer places the view about political leaders expressing the two viewpoints. The presented viewpoints are often situation dependent. Effectiveness is the something that the people to whom they lead are happy and their lifestyle is effective and easy.
First of all, the public opinion are the important factors that any political leader should listen time and often to know better about his deeds as leader. The principle in which any of the leader walks on, sometimes, he or she should avoid for maintaining peaceful environment. For instance, the leader has principle of performing his administrative duties only in his desk (in office), but when a physically disabled person arrives for any of his administrative task to be done, the leader should be feasible to go to him and help him the task completed. This gesture from leader brings happiness to one whose task was done as well as to the people who gets to know about it.
On the other hand, the leader should be able to consistently commit to pre-defined objectives and principles to bring effectiveness. In this situation, the leader must be able to work by the book. For example, the current Mayor of Kathmandu Metropolitan, Balen Shah, works by book. He is involved in creating easy flow of peoples walking in the footpath by removing the unauthorized shops that used to be on footpath; he successfully removed the shops that were found in the basement of the building which are meant for parking . By working as per particular policies, he can be able to present Kathmandu as managed city.
There is merits of being committed to particular principles as this helps to remain unbiased and impartial. For instance, if the leader is biased to some person or groups of person, he/she fails to perform any activities against them. Thus, it hinders the leaders from being effective. Hence, the leader should remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Both of the view points are dependent on the situation. The leader must avoid the principle and go with public opinion if the opinion/s is/are valid for bringing effectiveness in almost all the people to whom he leads. However, the leader should follow particular principles and objectives to create planned and managed system which leads to effectiveness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 528, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...the building which are meant for parking . By working as per particular policies, ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'There are merits'?
Suggestion: There are merits
...o present Kathmandu as managed city. There is merits of being committed to particular princi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08970976253 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87024447114 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514511873351 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.342953962 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.526315789 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9473684211 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310554697197 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100047541284 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653490022648 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183202595385 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315940627558 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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