Some people believe politician should reveal information to people while others believe the should not.
political positions are mostly as a result of voting. The people are always expected to come out en mass to vote for their preferred candidates. if people are made to spend their precious time in some harsh conditions just to get their vote counted for their candidate, such candidate should not have the right to withhold any information from the people.
The information belong to the people and the deserve to know everything. When it comes to political matter, it is expected that most information debated or negotiated are citizen oriented information and it will be a bad idea if a politician discuss issue that could have either positive or negative effect on the people without let the people know. if people are aware of some information, they may easily decipher the possible implications of such action and they will likely call the attention of the politician to it.
critics may believe that revealing information to citizen may lead to protest or riot which could probably lead to the discard of some ideas but it is worth noting that politicians are only minute percentage of the people they represented and the saying that "two head is better than one" should be apply for critical issues. A million head should be better than hundred.
A politician revealing information yo the people will make the politician more trusted. if people get to know some information an unexpected source, it will reduce the integrity of the politician among his voters and this could cause the politician his political position and other opening that may spur up in the long run.
Even though as a man, there is a possibility of a politician can forget to reveal some information or they could deliberately decide to withhold information, it is always better to let people who put you in power to know information most especially the critical ones. this will not only make the people trust their representative bu will also secure the politician future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00303030303 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7663546573 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.5278827824 60.3974514979 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.583333333 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382339640202 0.243740707755 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14063593889 0.0831039109588 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675734700308 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209397107801 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394734258622 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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