We are living in the world with complicated biodiversity which keeps ecological balance for all of the living species in this llanet. As far as I concern, either of the distinction could make butterfly effect to the world given there are so many unknow field in our living planet. In this way ,I belieive we should save every palnt and species in the world at the expense of our efforts in every meanful way. Also, this extraordinary effort would benefit us in the future which we can not predict precisely.I will address my views with points below.
To begin with, we are as human beings have the resposiblity to save the plant and animals. Viewing through the history of the Earth known to us, we as the most clever primates just have appeared for a short time in the life of the Earth which ages 4.6 billlion years. While as we can see during these millions of years as we appeared, we had made an overwhelming development compared with other living species living in this world. Over 7 billion people living in the world are sharing the resource of the plant with advancing technology that no other species could use. Thus as the most powerful living species, we should conceive of what is our role again. That is we are resposible for the development for thousand years that we made which had made great influence on the planet like pollution and extinction of living species due to the human activities. If we do not set up this attitude, we may suffer more disasters made by us like trusami or the global warming.
In addtion, do not look down upon any living species even if they are unnecessary to human beings.There is an old saying that anthing makes sense if they exists. We always perceive the surroundings by our own atitude with the knowledge we have learned, while some times we could not consider an issue like the necessity of some living species which seems like unessential comprehensively.Flies, for example, they transmitt diseases when they are flying from one place to another, and almost nodbody like them. Due to the development of medical technology, the scientist found they have great contribution to the medical field. Firstly, they are often taken as the specimens in gene test or research because of their simple DNA sequence. Secondly, their larva, the little bugs have a extradinary favor in eating rotten flesh. Hence, the patients who suffering truama or other diseases with rotten tissues which need to be cleaned, this it the showtime for the larva.
Finally, we should save animals and plants especiall these endagered living species as possible as we can. Given in this world of biodiversity ,we do no know what is goning on if a certain species asbent in this world , what this extinction will bring to us. As we know the biodiversity is significant in balancing the ecosystem, If a kind of animal is extincted, their rivals would lack of food selections while the food will thrive which could influent the balance of the system. So saving the plants and animals in our every efforts is also saving us.
In conclusion, we as the most powerful human beings should save the living species especially these endangered with every effort we can.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...sity which keeps ecological balance for all of the living species in this llanet. As far a...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'fields'?
Suggestion: fields
...he world given there are so many unknow field in our living planet. In this way ,I be...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... field in our living planet. In this way ,I belieive we should save every palnt an...
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Suggestion: I
...ture which we can not predict precisely.I will address my views with points below...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...nology that no other species could use. Thus as the most powerful living species, we...
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Message: The pronoun is must be used with 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...onceive of what is our role again. That is we are resposible for the development f...
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Suggestion: a thousand
... are resposible for the development for thousand years that we made which had made great...
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...if they are unnecessary to human beings.There is an old saying that anthing makes sen...
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... seems like unessential comprehensively.Flies, for example, they transmitt diseases w...
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Suggestion: an
...ndly, their larva, the little bugs have a extradinary favor in eating rotten fles...
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...can. Given in this world of biodiversity ,we do no know what is goning on if a cer...
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Suggestion: ,
...f a certain species asbent in this world , what this extinction will bring to us. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2644.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 551.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79854809437 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84493438435 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62977344263 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486388384755 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 820.8 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 6.24550561798 304% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1232537213 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.181818182 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0454545455 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11663328279 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479681825983 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514696256115 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866512653291 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268435889951 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.