Some people believe that society should try to save every plant and animal species, despite the expense to humans in effort, time, and financial well-being. Others believe that society need not make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in money and jobs, to save endangered species.
It is true that there are controversies about saving every plant and animal species even though it requires sacrifice of human being’s effort, time and monetary values. Some people argue that it is extremely important because we are also parts of nature as well as other plants and animals, but others insist that it is not worth to try with spending a lot of recourses and extraordinary efforts. As our history proves, I believe saving other species at any cost is our duty.
To begin with, protecting other plants and animals is important to maintain our ecosystem because we are not still capable of building another ecosystem or revising current one. As Biosphere II experiments was ended with some lessons, our planet’s ecosystem is extremely complicated and not easily copied or fixed in short time. Therefore, if other species are continuously diminishing due to human’s activities, there might be serious damage on our nature’s own system, and it cannot be fixed permanently. Also, as a result of this damage, our race will suffer from lack of foods or extreme change in climate. In addition, saving other species is essential because they might be helpful for developing new technology. It is not novel anymore that scientists are researching specific organs of some animals or plants to develop new material or mechanism which can be adopted to new inventions or helpful to improve current products. Therefore, if we lose more kinds of animals and plants, there will be no more chance to learn from other species. As discussed above, saving animals and plants is necessary to save our ecosystem and let them help our researchers to develop novel inventions by imitating them or their organs.
However, as other people argue, there might be some drawback of inputting to much resources to save animals and plants. As our governments and other organizations are suffering from lack of budgets, if more resources are invested on saving other species, our welfare will be impaired. Current situation of COVID-19 virus shows this very well. Many countries including the United States spent tremendous money to preserve and study other species instead of allocating more resources to medical system. As a result of this allocation, most countries’ medical infrastructures were not functioning well in the pandemic situation. People are dying because of lack of doctors, nurses, and medical equipment. If the money invested on other animals and plants were spent to improve medical care, the number of casualties would have been lower than now. Therefore, it is not easy to deny that use of money to save other species could be less beneficial because it means there will be less investment on our welfare.
Nevertheless, I believe saving other species will be meaningful because of the reasons stated above. Also, as our governments are using a lot of resources on other less beneficial things, such as nuclear missiles, there could be many areas other than saving animals and plants, which budgets should be reallocated to our welfare system. Therefore, other animals and plants should be preserved at any cost for our own good.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, in short, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2634.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 515.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1145631068 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73273912679 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477669902913 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 842.4 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.10617977528 386% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6330712564 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.727272727 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4090909091 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285484994526 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955699897904 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609646098947 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217975343282 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802723689602 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.