Morality is considered to be a great teacher and with logic we can become the masters of it.A person having high morals, well this would be better if i say logically high morals can be considered as best in town.But we are living in a world where morals are considered to be high and everybody follows them without any logic. This sounds weird right. You can't teach a kid to steal or murder someone because of food or money, right? This sounds morally wrong but logically correct if someone have need of that particular thing.Well this is what we are taught, we should prefer ourselves first.But in my opinion, strong base of morals should be the foundation , a person can be turned down into a logical person later on, if not then being having strong morals wouldn't let him do wrong things.I would like to enhance few examples for this stating to agree to the point.
A person who is doing a job as a data analyst or data scientist have access to all the database of the company's client. Well making good amount of money for himself/herself by selling the database would sound logically correct but do you think these are signs of good morality. In Contrast to this, country with the largest population "India", is considered to be the country of high morals , so the people pouring tons of milk on a stone, in the name of god does it sound morally correct? Definitely no but here comes the power of logic, many people have stop doing these things when explained logically. A girl wearing short clothes is considered to be a girl with low morals? No definitely but when explained them with the logical reasons , people try to change their mentality. Here comes the superiority of being logical.
Stating few examples above, morality should be the first thing which should always be foundation of logic, logical thinking can be developed using various reasons.
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- Some parents and teachers think that children’s behavior should be strictly controlled. While some think that children should be free to behave. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 89
- Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society 50
- The following appeared in a letter from the owner of the Sunnyside Towers apartment building to its manager."One month ago, all the showerheads on the first five floors of Sunnyside Towers were modified to restrict the water flow to approximately one 55
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 33
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, well, in contrast, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 326.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74846625767 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57028221086 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549079754601 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 115.262110716 60.3974514979 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29302714539 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968710098579 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689525459976 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215187618074 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337871854868 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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