Democracy states that it is 'of the people for the people and by the people' and where there is monarchy, although not necessarily,it is assumed to be in the interest of people. In both cases the politics has to benefit the general populace. One can achieve so by either supporting the general consensus or by trying to achieve the ideal. While achieving the ideal is not practical and one can merely try to be as close as possible to the apotheosis of politics, finding common grounds and reaching reasonable consensus sounds more cogent.
To begin with, the problems faced by people are best understood by people, and they can come up with several ideas that benefit the most. Politics that adhere by people, helps, by listening to the consensus and understanding their needs. Any solution provided so would prove beneficial to, if not all, the most of populace. There are several examples of leaders worldwide who have gone against the ideological solutions and have provided the residents with what they need the most.
On the other hand, the ideological pursuit can get the most ideal solution but it may not be the best solution for people, in a particular scenario. For example, people might want a particular river to be diverted towards the region where population density is high and water is in scarcity. The ideal solution would suggest one to leave the natural resource as it is and re-enforce the transportation of water to the resident areas. But the general consensus might suggest that diverting river will benefit people the most.
The non ideological solution might create great disturbances sometimes but ultimately help the people, thus get a lot of support form the people. For example, the demonetization that took place in India, resulted in a huge crisis of currency notes and impacted the growth rate of country. An ideal solution would have not suggested such action plan. This affected the common man the most, still the minister was confidently supported by citizens because the result of this plan is what the people wanted the most and that is to curb the black money.
Doing what is in favor of the consensus may have fewer side-effects but the consensus should be favored, if a full implementation is not possible partial implementations could also work. Take for example the strict immigration laws implement in the united states to device solution to increasing rate of unemployment sourced by global competition. While an ideology would have favored globalization over the need of residents, favoring the citizens of united states helped country get stable domestic economy and more jobs for its citizens.
In conclusion, the most ideal steps might not prove to be the most beneficial solutions. In politics one shall always consider the dichotomy thoroughly and go for what is in the favor of larger number of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, thus, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2392.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 476.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02521008403 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74698671665 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485294117647 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 760.5 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4336750712 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.904761905 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168477161113 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518557422202 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504086340521 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893911137895 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539822244894 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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