Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to the society.other argue that being citizen involves more responsibilities.Discuss what is your opinion?
Few people believe that paying out taxes is adequate to contribute to the community while others think that plenty of responsibilities needed as a citizen. I will discuss individual should be responsible as a citizen and I will give my opinion in the following paragraphs.
let's begin by looking at the advantage of being responsible person to a community. One of the main positive reason is if individual will aware about their own duties then there would be more self aware.what mean by this is that if a person would responsible theirselves then they would save environment their own. By this way people will contribute to their country by saving trees. Thus,it will be more helpful to individuals and their own country. another one advantage of being responsible mankind is that it would be more convenient way to contribute to their own countries.
on the other hand, paying only tax is not only adequate for contributing to society. There are some rules and regulation which people have to follow as a citizen of that particular country. By paying taxes is not only way to contribute to the community. For intance, in 2014, in Africa myriads of people died in an illness called Ebola government cannot do everything, hence, individual should pay tax with their responsibilities.
To recapitulate, I re-iterate my views that paying taxes is important for country's economy though, individual should be punctual of their own responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, then, thus, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 238.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13865546218 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08837248881 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525210084034 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9334974408 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.916666667 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291203466252 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117630883385 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462646410075 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181206247398 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616298141309 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 100.480337079 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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