Success, whether academic or professional, involves an ability to survive in a new
environment and, eventually, to change it.
Whether it is an academic success or a professional success, both ultimately leads to acquiring knowledge in the form of the theory or practical. Today's world is a knowledge society so a person with knowledge will never be looked down upon in the society. The knowledge, acquired by a person, when gets to the verge of altering form, leads to the development of a new idea.
Considering academic success, we have seen may innovations and researches being done due to which the researchers and the scientists are demarcated as the most intelligent minds of the world and are respected worldwide. Science and innovation had led to the development of communication technologies, transportation, and every other gadget that had made our life luxurious. These innovations have led the making to the modernised technological era.
Highlighting on the professionals consider a case of a sportsperson, who with his hard work and dedication has culminated in his field. that sportsperson will then be known worldwide, will have name and fame, will have respect and what not. once he has succeeded in his field he has not only brought name and fame to himself but to his country and to its fellow citizens as well. people will be proud of him and in return, he will b awarded with deep respect in everyone's heart. For another example, I would like to state a famous tailor, not known worldwide, till one his consistent customer became the prime minister of India, yes Mr. Narendra Damodar Modi present prime minister of India, the tailor became famous and has earned his respect with his work that his has been doing or probably may do throughout his life.
In this modernised world, people had understood that it does not matter in which field you are, in which domain you are, what you are doing? if you do your work with passion, success is inevitable and along with it respect, name and fame will arrive at your doorsteps.
Passion, dedication, and hard work is the key through which a person can earn respect in the society and also will hold the power to change the world. Simple things do matter, do what you do but with passion and dedication. Therefore, no matter whether you are a professional or student, success will play its role, and it will hold the whole world in front of you, and if you have the will to grab it, the next step will be towards the change.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234408602151 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.161290322581 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0645161290323 0.0880659088768 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0344086021505 0.0497285424764 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0731182795699 0.0444667217837 164% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0967741935484 0.12292977631 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0516129032258 0.0406280797675 127% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80958842443 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0258064516129 0.030933414821 83% => OK
Particles: 0.00215053763441 0.0016655270985 129% => OK
Determiners: 0.0881720430108 0.0997080785238 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0344086021505 0.0249443105267 138% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0215053763441 0.0148568991511 145% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2389.0 2732.02544248 87% => OK
No of words: 412.0 452.878318584 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79854368932 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.29854368932 0.366273622748 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.228155339806 0.280924506359 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162621359223 0.200843997647 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116504854369 0.132149295362 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80958842443 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 219.290929204 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519417475728 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 58.3023717435 55.4138127331 105% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 25.75 23.380412469 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4369544109 59.4972553346 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.3125 141.124799967 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 23.380412469 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5625 0.674092028746 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 48.5655339806 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.424 1.64882698954 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252103418565 0.391690518653 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112160641465 0.123202303941 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0428002007094 0.077325440228 55% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.597460282907 0.547984918172 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132321913283 0.149214159877 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107967030637 0.161403998019 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823530573442 0.0892212321368 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.266629611501 0.385218514788 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0563695934027 0.0692045440612 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161512135332 0.275328986314 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380040112425 0.0653680567796 58% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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