"Technological advancement has made our lives easier and more convenient, but it has also brought about significant ethical challenges. To what extent should ethical considerations shape the development and use of technology?"
The world is an evolving sphere, it was not was what it was some hundreds of years ago and this is largely due to the impact of technology on it. These impact are so vast that they can’t be outlined completely but some major ones includes improvement in communication, increased life expectancy Although a controversial point, more efficient means of transportation amongst others, while these are laudable improvements , I agree with the prompt that it has brought about some significant ethical challenges which sometimes may stand to abstruse its main purpose
Firstly, the internet as a case study, communication hitherto the advent of the internet was based on proximity, nowadays the distance barrier has been eliminated by the internet as two or more individuals can communicate in real time regardless of how many miles they stand apart,while the internet has made its reputation for making life extremely easier, it’s also fair to note that it also has been a bane to some humans’ existence due to the way it us being used
The internet has seen people commit suicide due to it being deployed by people with ulterior motives to defraud and engage in all sort of chicanery acts which may include fraud, duping and even stealing.
Another example is in the case of illicit contents which are sprinkled on the internet which acts to blacken and skew the coming generations from a path of righteousness or morality to a path of doom and libertine
Contents like pornography should
not be readily accessible and available to all and sundry on the net, that is, there should be an age gap and other factors in order to gain access to it
Ethical considerations should
Shape the development and utilisation of the use of technology because in the case of fraud, the victims are scarred for life and it may result in more than just the loss of money or properties but also the loss of life of the victim involved
In conclusion, while technological advancement have impacted our lives positively, there should be considerations and moderations to its use so the adverse effect do not get explored and taken advantage of
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89013537708 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563888888889 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.2370786517 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 120.0 23.0359550562 521% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 409.186455733 60.3974514979 677% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 592.0 118.986275619 498% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 120.0 23.4991977007 511% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.0 5.21951772744 441% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235279807393 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13398950559 0.0831039109588 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712347854534 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104812829172 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103038297166 0.0667264976115 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 61.8 14.1392134831 437% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -50.32 48.8420337079 -103% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.1 7.92365168539 279% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 50.1 12.1743820225 412% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.5 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.84 8.38706741573 165% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 50.0 11.2143820225 446% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 50.0 11.7820224719 424% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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