Technologies are developed to solve human's problems, and it has come a long way that technologies are so powerful and influential to our daily life. As the old saying goes, power can bring us goods and also evil, it all depends on how you utilize it. Technology perfectly fits the concept of the old saying, good or bad, it all depends on how you use it.
An example that technology changed our daily life is the GPS system. Originally developed for defense purpose, which aimed to precisely locate strategic targets and eliminate it, GPS is now available to every civilian in the world. A once weaponized technology used on war zone has now transformed to one of the most important society applications, GPS navigation. Before GPS is available to the public, travelers rely on physical map to figure out where their position is and how to get to the destination. With GPS and digital map, people now can easily locate themselves in a totally foreign environment, and also be provided with the shortest route to their destination instantly, which reduce the stress of the traveler by not having to stop once in a while to check if they are on their planned route. The same technology with two different application, creates totally different impact on the society.
Another example is the internet, a fast-growing new media, which utilize its instant nature and exposure to billions of users around the world, spread information so much faster and more personalized than traditional media like TVs or newspapers. With internet, people can access information instantly that would normally take hours to find in a library. People can even get education online, which reduce the cost and provide more opportunities for people who wouldn't afford to go to school physically. But internet is also a tool to manipulate the crowd. For example, during election, each candidate's campaign release negative information, sometimes untruthful, towards the opponents and try to impact voter’s decision.
Technologies are designed to solve problems, and people who use it define its nature of good or bad.
- The best way to solve environmental problems caused by consumer generated waste is for towns and cities to impose strict limits on the amount of trash they will accept from each household Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree 50
- The following is a memorandum from the office of Mayor Harrison Smith Jones In order to relieve Briggsville s notorious traffic congestion Mayor Harrison Smith Jones plans to build a multi million dollar subway system The subway will run through the major 73
- The following is a memorandum from the office of Mayor Harrison Smith Jones In order to relieve Briggsville s notorious traffic congestion Mayor Harrison Smith Jones plans to build a multi million dollar subway system The subway will run through the major 60
- Technology while apparently aimed to simplify our lives only makes our lives more complicated Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In dev 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'medium'?
Suggestion: medium
...ple is the internet, a fast-growing new media, which utilize its instant nature and e...
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Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ovide more opportunities for people who wouldnt afford to go to school physically. But ...
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Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'defines'?
Suggestion: defines
...o solve problems, and people who use it define its nature of good or bad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 345.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09565217391 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86910258311 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591304347826 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1476378384 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.2 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159105890441 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487442490472 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271690271783 0.0758088955206 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080606143553 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366044018603 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.