Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
I would like to start off by stating in a very elementary but a profound saying "Never reinvent the wheel again". We are at an age where are lives are completly overrun by technology starting from an electric shaver ;cashless transactions for the early morning hot coffee; to commuting thousands of miles within hours ; to connecting with you loved ones sitting oceans apart as if you were sitting besides them.
We are now able to perform cardinal tasks with greater efficacy and accuracy : Polio that once eradicated half of the human kinds from the face of the earth has a fatality percentage below 1% now. Researches and inventions are no longer indigenous but are globally shared and acknowledged to help us all.
Technology is still at it's infacy, isin't quiescent in its effects.
We are able to delegate mudane but complex tasks in technologies hand to be able to step forward and work towards solving other complex ; dynamic issues.
Having said that, we cannot neglect the other side of the coin. In technologies wake, being socially visible is far from optional.Neophytes today are at a greater risk of psychological disorders, depression leading to a minatory future.According to a recent study from harvard, survey suggested with growing technology has a direct relation with fledglings mindset, with a increase of 10% teenagers reported to be in depression.
With that said, we cannot negate the complications assocaited with it , however, the advantages previal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ate the complications assocaited with it , however, the advantages previal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 240.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23333333333 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06130806925 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679166666667 0.4932671777 138% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.414091132 60.3974514979 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.555555556 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00749493272028 0.243740707755 3% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00221375417427 0.0831039109588 3% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00626144235403 0.0758088955206 8% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0027798599113 0.150359130593 2% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00621595572959 0.0667264976115 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.38706741573 121% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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