Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Now a days, human is surrounded by numerous digital and electronics devices which are designed to make our lives simple.
One can find many benefits of technology in everyday life. Our days starts with checking messages and mails on mobile phones then using various apps of transportation to the work and days ends with verious entertainment options at the night. So in the pace of life we have to rely on many technologies.
Use of these technology also has many advantages in various fields. for example, advancement in medical fields help to diagnose many diseaes in advance and they can be cured before any exacurbated affect on human life. Another example of mobile phone which makes communication easy than earlier. Thus we can contact any person aroud the globe in few clicks. The Technology helped in many other fields, or we can say almost every field to make the human task easy.
However, every coin has two side, the advancement in technology also have some some not so good effect on human lives. Everyday a new tech comes in the market and claim to have better features than the previous one, tempts person to use new features and become familier to it. They feel their life is more complicated without technology.
Thus, Recent advencement in technology has helped humans in many aspect of life and made the complicated tasks easy. The overuse of the same technology may be harmful for human mental development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days, human is surrounded by numerous digita...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days, human is surrounded by numerous digita...
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Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...e to rely on many technologies. Use of these technology also has many advantages in various fie...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... has many advantages in various fields. for example, advancement in medical fields ...
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Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...hey can be cured before any exacurbated affect on human life. Another example of mobile p...
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Line 4, column 296, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... makes communication easy than earlier. Thus we can contact any person aroud the glo...
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Line 6, column 75, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: some
...the advancement in technology also have some some not so good effect on human lives. Ever...
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Line 6, column 120, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...some not so good effect on human lives. Everyday a new tech comes in the market and clai...
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Line 8, column 61, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...ment in technology has helped humans in many aspect of life and made the complicated tasks ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, then, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 243.0 442.535393258 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92181069959 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62463702976 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604938271605 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6981596242 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4285714286 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0871694796679 0.243740707755 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308117844305 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047364331552 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584147769 0.150359130593 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565607831288 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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