When we hear the word technology what comes to our mind?Something that is new,time saving,making our life comfortable.But the topic tells us that technology makes our life more complicated which completely contrast what we have thought of technology.Technology have always been of great importance in the history of mankind.Use of technology can be traced back right from the invention of wheels to modern worlds technology of automatic driving cars.Mankind has become so dependent on technology that day without use of technology will be nevertheless then a nightmare.Our most of the activities are depend on the use of the technology as they make our life more easier and comfortable.
Technology is used almost in every sector of the world let it be science,commerce or literature.Man has touched the space and sooner planning to settle to Mars in the coming future.This is possible only due to the advances in the technology.The use of internet and mobile-phones for speedy communication is the good example of how technology is making our life simple and comfortable.The audio books available on the internet has open the gates for literature field.Now people do not have to stress there eyes to read the books and provide nourishment for brains.We can just download the audio book and listen to it whenever we want.The list can be even longer but time does not permit me to do so.Thus,technology has pervasive importance in all the field in the modern world making our life easy and mirthful.
Technology has tacitly improved the human ability to think as well.Looking at the benefits of the technology scientists are engaged in many more invention of the technology.The old technology is supplanted by the newer one.For example,the continuous development in the of mode of transports like cars,trains ,airplanes seems to be never ending.Use of the bullet trains over the conventional diesel engine trains is well known.It has lessen the time of travel and thus indirectly made the passengers life easy.Thus,one invention leads to the another inventions and advances in technology.
However as it is said every coin has two sides,technology has cons too.For example,the automobile industry has profligate so much.It has lead to pollution havoc.Increase in the carbon percentage in the air has invited the well known demon commonly known as 'Global warming'.Global warming is badly hampering the mankind life in many ways.The irregular weather pattern is one of the crux of pollution.The excess use of resources like petrol and diesel have put them on the edge of extinction.But,again the technology have ameliorated this grave problem.The invention of cars using water as fuel is in process.Various renewable resources like solar energy,Wind energy ,geothermal energy.etc are harness to tackle this problem.
Well the use of advanced technology has bolster terrorism as well.Many countries across the world are infected by the dreadful virus of terrorism.The use of advanced machinery and ammunition has supplemented terrorism.Terrorist make use of the various new technologies to make dreadful weapons which prove harmful for the innocent people.However,again this problem can be killed by the technology itself.Use of drones have put a check on the terrorist activities.The use of drones by US in Afganistan is one of the well known example of counter acting terrorism.
Thus ,technology is a undeniable boon which we have invented to make our life easy and comfortable.It make our complex jobs easy,reduces the time to perform activities,help us track our progress in commerce.So it can be concluded that use of technology as boon or bane completely in the hands on mankind.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'as to', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.301127214171 0.240241500013 125% => OK
Verbs: 0.185185185185 0.157235817809 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0789049919485 0.0880659088768 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0531400966184 0.0497285424764 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0354267310789 0.0444667217837 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128824476651 0.12292977631 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0547504025765 0.0406280797675 135% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.50605616396 2.79330140395 126% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0273752012882 0.030933414821 88% => OK
Particles: 0.00161030595813 0.0016655270985 97% => OK
Determiners: 0.0966183574879 0.0997080785238 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00966183574879 0.0249443105267 39% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0112721417069 0.0148568991511 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3693.0 2732.02544248 135% => OK
No of words: 582.0 452.878318584 129% => OK
Chars per words: 6.34536082474 6.0361032391 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91168771031 4.58838876751 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.362542955326 0.366273622748 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.290378006873 0.280924506359 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.23883161512 0.200843997647 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.192439862543 0.132149295362 146% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50605616396 2.79330140395 126% => OK
Unique words: 299.0 219.290929204 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513745704467 0.48968727796 105% => OK
Word variations: 63.98677911 55.4138127331 115% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6194690265 29% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 97.0 23.380412469 415% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 160.530803551 59.4972553346 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 615.5 141.124799967 436% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 97.0 23.380412469 415% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 0.674092028746 272% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 64.0 5.21349557522 1228% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 126.037800687 51.4728631049 245% => OK
Elegance: 1.77058823529 1.64882698954 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327912096134 0.391690518653 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.370331615074 0.123202303941 301% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0914267624668 0.077325440228 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 2.26623325918e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.244453127982 0.161403998019 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05035685964 0.0892212321368 56% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.495247958028 0.385218514788 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.130807872455 0.0692045440612 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244453127982 0.275328986314 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05035685964 0.0653680567796 77% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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