The author states that the woven baskets which had a particular distinctive pattern have been found in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea. Thus it was believed by the people that the woven basket can be made only by the palean people. However,a archaeologist recently discovered a palean basket in Lithos. Lithos is the ancient village which is across the Brim river from Palea. Thus author concludes that the woven basket were not unique palean. But the authors claim is based on very weak evidences.
Author mentions about the distinct pattern of the woven baskets which were made by the people of palea. But the author does not briefly explain the distinct character of the basket.If the basket found by the archaeologist was of exactly same pattern as that of the palean basket then it would strengthen the authors claim. If the pattern would vary from the palean basket distinctive pattern then it would weaken the claim of the author.
Moreover,author states that the Lithos was across the river. He also tell us that the river was deep and broad.But author does not take into consideration that the basket would have flown in the river from palea and reach the village of Lithos. Author that characteristics of river Brim & state that boat could be only be the mode of transport. But the palean boats were not found during the archaeological survey.The author does not mentions that the river was uncrossable. If the people of palea were good swimmers then they might have crossed the river. The immigration of the people from palea to lithos may lead in the sharing of the knowledge of making the woven basket.
Thus,the author needs to give more strong evidences which will leads us to the conclusion that palean basket were not unique palean.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... it would strengthen the authors claim. If the pattern would vary from the palean ...
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...entions that the river was uncrossable. If the people of palea were good swimmers ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'briefly', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276923076923 0.25644967241 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.163076923077 0.15541462614 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0676923076923 0.0836205057962 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0553846153846 0.0520304965353 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0215384615385 0.0272364105082 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141538461538 0.125424944231 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0338461538462 0.0416121511921 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51570024571 2.79052419416 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00923076923077 0.026700313972 35% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.147692307692 0.113004496875 131% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0276923076923 0.0255425247493 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0123076923077 0.0127820249294 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1784.0 2731.13054187 65% => OK
No of words: 303.0 446.07635468 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88778877888 6.12365571057 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.57801047555 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.346534653465 0.378187486979 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.19801980198 0.287650121315 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.115511551155 0.208842608468 55% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0858085808581 0.135150697306 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51570024571 2.79052419416 90% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 207.018472906 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422442244224 0.469332199767 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.6763302514 52.1807786196 78% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.039408867 80% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9375 23.2022227129 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0159260012 57.7814097925 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 141.986410481 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 23.2022227129 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.724660767414 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.58251231527 363% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.739480198 51.9672348444 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.88461538462 1.8405768891 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.519052521392 0.441005458295 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.171203090827 0.135418324435 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.135791208416 0.0829849096947 164% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.654296577299 0.58762219726 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.189878033821 0.147661913831 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.250659874377 0.193483328276 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128991739626 0.0970749176394 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.565697338622 0.42659136922 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.165132497404 0.0774707102158 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.37055824363 0.312017818177 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132983847959 0.0698173142475 190% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.33743842365 60% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.87684729064 29% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.82512315271 187% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 6.46551724138 77% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 5.36822660099 37% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.82389162562 212% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 14.657635468 89% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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