Presenting an idea to the masses is bound to have varried reactions--from undying support to down right rejections and everything in between. Encouragement and doubts have equal effects, but it is more difficult to see an idea through when there are discouraging reactions. However, those who persevere, regardless of doubt and criticism others may express, are the ones who have a better chance at leaving a lasting legacy.
Looking back at the recent history, Abraham Lincoln comes to mind. His initial idea to abolish slavery no doubt caused an uproar among the slave owners. Had the former president gave up due to resistance, the United States would be drastically different right now.
A legacy can signify a positive or negative impact an idea has on society. For instance, Adolf Hitler, whose notoriety was solidfied when he fought against human rights advocates around the world. He saw his genocidal idea through and the outcome was nothing short of a legacy--a devasting one, of course.
There are times when a idea is simply implausible. An ambitious aviator could dream about soaring through the sky without any mechanical assistance. He could unyieldingly see his idea through until his death bed, but it is likely that nothing would come out of it because it is physically impossible--at least for our current reality. Perseverence is a necessity for success; however, it does not necessarily guarantee success. An ambitious person might leave a memorable impression on many people for his or her attempts, but a legacy would require success to be called a legacy.
- Those who see their ideas through regardless of doubts or criticism others may express are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy 50
- Understanding the past is of little use to those in current positions of leadership Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and s 75
- Discussing controversial topics with those with contrasting views is not useful because very few people change their mind when questioned about their core beliefs 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...one, of course. There are times when a idea is simply implausible. An ambitiou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, at least, for instance, no doubt, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 2235.4752809 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 258.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15891472868 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84873173881 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658914728682 0.4932671777 134% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 704.065955056 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2818473755 60.3974514979 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0714285714 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280163543713 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084622873917 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129223672168 0.0758088955206 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156681392593 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138708837454 0.0667264976115 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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