Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
I strongly agree with the statement which indirectly mentions the mental strength one is supposed to maintain in order to see one's ideas through. We live in a world of envy, jealousy and hatred for others success. Very few people personally feel good seeing other's success - and they are undeniably the gems this world is in need of. It is absolutely vital for one to be firm about their intuition and do what intrigues them.
In this era of technology and growth, people are quite more equipped in following their dreams and ideas than what was evident in history. Technology and research & development have made people more aware of what's going on at that very instant and how the world is shaping us for the future. Hence, creativity and analytical skills are developing at a rapid pace. There is not any lack of ideas in this world, but rather, the implementation which requires a higher level of mental toughness. People are immensely influenced by other's opinions, criticism and doubts which hinder their own progress.
One has to understand that the more one is firm and determined about their own ideas and decisions, the better it is. There is absolutely no doubt that sometimes other's criticism and doubts make you mentally stronger. In addition to that, there is a chance that you could be heading in the wrong direction which can be corrected by other's interruption.
In order to know when to acknowledge other's doubts and to know when to exactly give a response requires a lot of experience. Everyone keeps learning on a daily basis through their own mistakes and through other's timely criticism. Hence, one has to learn to balance the two aspects of listening to other's comments and to go by your gut in a subtle manner.
Clarity of mind is another aspect which has to be taken into consideration. One should always back their ideas and decisions with proper research beforehand in order to have a clear state of mind. Other's criticism and doubts or sometimes disapproval can become a great obstacle in your way to success. When one knows what he or she is doing then the way to success becomes a walk in the park.
One should not have a facile knowledge of the subject their ideas are related to. People should be curious in their approach because it takes meticulous and persistent efforts to make your work foolproof.
In a nutshell, One has to know when to listen and when to ignore other's comments for reaching the epitome of their career.
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- In order to help small businesses thrive, government should play a minimal role in private business matters. 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...is supposed to maintain in order to see ones ideas through. We live in a world of en...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...elopment have made people more aware of whats going on at that very instant and how t...
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Line 4, column 333, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...ong direction which can be corrected by others interruption. In order to know when...
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Line 6, column 336, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a subtle manner" with adverb for "subtle"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...o others comments and to go by your gut in a subtle manner. Clarity of mind is another aspect ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, then, as to, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2046.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 427.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79156908665 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58869327175 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512880562061 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3135738846 60.3974514979 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.0 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4090909091 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235160486279 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729398054681 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500420149107 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122631009424 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312721506882 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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