Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Sometimes people could not understand the passion and vision and stick to past for judging the future. But visionary people see through their ideas and become an iconoclast.
A popular example of this is, Elon Musk. Few years back when electric cars were assumed to be a second car used for covering mere small distances at low speed, Elon Musk started Tesla, an electric car company that left everyone surprised. People severely criticised his idea of making electric car as their primary car and his dream of changing the entire world car transport, only with elctric cars. His company not only made a reliable Electric car, but also made fastest car that achieves 0-60 mph speed. Elon Musk also started Spacex which is a primary compatitor to NASA. He faced similar criticism that rocket science is most complex and going against organizations like NASA is stupid thing to do. But now NASA has assigned SPACEX rockets for thier future projects.
Novel ideas can frighten people and that can lead to criticism. In early 1900 centuries, when British vehemently ruling their Indian colony, people were angry and started violent protest against British government in India. However, Mahatma Gandhi was a person who chose peaceful protest instead of violence. Most of the Indian leader criticised and mocked Gandhi's way. But when entire world saw Gandhi protesting with peace even when British government brutally opposing indian peaceful rallies, world leaders from many countries condemned British government. Eventually, Gandhi's efforts made huge contribution for Indian independance. This shows
It is human tendency to oppose something new. Manier times people want to follow the trend or traditional way, rather than a new way. Because most of the people can judge a new idea if their life experience doesn't any reference to the idea. This is how the human brain works, resistence to the change. Hence when Albert Einstein showed that the matter and energy from entire uniververse can be explained with just mathematical formula many people or even scientist opposed the concept. Later, it become the innovation of the century.
Hence with a strong visionary who does not care about other's opinions go and achieve their dreams, irrespective of the criticism they receive. Going against the norm and achiving someone never achieved are the commonities of the legends.
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- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 66
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 383.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24281984334 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48156081948 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605744125326 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8954917402 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3043478261 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.652173913 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78260869565 5.21951772744 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0947710237375 0.243740707755 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277298292671 0.0831039109588 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501921003249 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064932847604 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381905485983 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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